Reviews for Since When Are There Two Potters? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Just an question: will the docs be updated on AO3 as well? I’m mostly over there now a days, so I was wondering. Thank you for continuing to write! |
![]() ![]() So I like this fanfic. I think the plot was good. I love the idea of Harry raising sasuke, the idea that sasuke has to learn magic differently, and the ending was satisfying in a way that a lot of fics aren’t. However, I also felt that this fan fiction was lacking. For more than half of the story I felt like you were missing so much detail and so much of the story. It was just too fast pace. It almost felt like reading a series of oneshots versus a complete story. Because of that, your character development suffered a little bit. You have some good ideas here and a very good plot. I personally would just like to see if fleshed out a little more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You everyone knew what Severus was thinking. Severus 'well she's gone and fucked up' |
![]() ![]() ![]() IDK if this is true or not but Scififan33 has this exact same story on their profile and it is practically word for word the same story and I think it might have been stolen. They do far have 4 chapters condensed into 2. IDK if they did or not but I just wanted to let you know since I really liked what I read and went to look for more HP/N crossovers to read and thought I was seeing double. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sqweeeee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I appreciate the threat of "quality time with Ibiki." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Le gasp! oh is no, there will be slash in this fix so I must leave a "scathing" review when it is confirmed, and ignore the fact that it said so in the summary! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sasuke’s Birthdate is July 23 |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are correct with the usage of the two words. One of my sisters taught herself how to speak Japanese & I picked it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally read this in one day. From about 7am to midnight all I did was read this story. I totally took a couple of breaks, but damn, I haven't read like this since middle school |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Between blood adoption and the two worlds possibly being aligned differently (summer in one being winter in the other and the like), Sasuke's birthday is very likely different in each world or outright changed to reflect his becoming a Potter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. I can't believe this is it. Its amazing and definitely worth reading |
![]() ![]() your story has a plot hole why was orochimaru in the forest if not to attack sasuke for his sharigan he did not know he was their other than that it was great |
![]() ![]() Wow. More Harry Potter slash shit. Just what we needed more of. |