I love this pairing, Herm and Sev just have so much chemistry. This sounds like its going to be great, I'm excited to read more :)

Great story! I hope you finish it.

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You-You-YOU! Cliffhanger! Horrible! Gah!

This has reduced me to one-word sentences. See what I've come to? Grr. You are going to have some explaining to do.

And, yes. Cleverly done self-promotion there. I caught it. Mwaha.

So, yes. Brilliantly done Snape. And although I don't care for Hermione all that much, you've done a palatable job with her (which is more than I can say for some other authors floating around the web).

VivienneLaurise

This is a great story but you have really left us hanging here. Are you going to be updating anytime soon? I really hope so..

Goodness! How simply delectable (I never use that word - it simply fit) of a fic! I must ask, though - Did you get your idea for killing Hermione from the television show House, by any chance? That was the exact method they used on the show to properly temporarily kill a patient to find a diagnosis of some sort for something.

I cannot wait to see where you decide to take this, and how you introduce the element of romance to this fic. Good job, and I highly look forward to your next update!

loved the chapter, everyones reaction to the idea of killing Hermione is priceless, mebbe its just me but it seemed to go by too fast for something we've all been waiting for so long, hope u dont make wait another eternity for the next chappie!

Just found this story, rec'd on WIKKT, and I must say I am enjoying it a great deal. Hermione in peril, Snarky Sev-what more could I want?

I won't kill you for the long wait - in hopes that you update again soon! Well...I won't kill you at all, but I really do want an update soon! Perhaps I'll just send scary messages...things like: update, or feel the burn of bad luck! Lol...only joking of course.

I was so disappointed when the chapter ended. I was hoping we'd get to read about the procedure. However, you left it at quite teh cliffy, and I really, really hope you update soon. I might just melt into a puddle of goo if you don't!

glad to see you got it up without a glitch. you already know how much i loved the chapter.

i'm willing to say on as long as you need me, just drop an email now and then and i'll give you honest opinions. by the way, my brother downloaded AIM the other day, so i'll be setting that up for myself soon. I'll let you know my screen name when i have one.

glad to have helped.

catherine

This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter to come. Please update as soon as you can!

Oh...I love this fic! It is fantastic...No wait Brilliant.

I can not wait find out what happens to Hermione, I hope things go OK.

Update this brilliant fic soon PLEASE!

green-eyed-angel

This is a great idea and I love how you're handling the situation. I'd love to see what happens! (The suspense!)

" “Bravo, Severus! Not only have you managed to deify yourself, but you’ve insulted Miss Granger and everyone else in this room in the same breath " xD that part was funny. and this part "“You can stop staring, Albus. I can’t imagine I’m that attractive right now,” Snape said with a short, humourless laugh." Hehe. Slytherin humor awesome. (Draco! xD) hehe. And I bet you had lots of fun writing the part about how beautiful language is. Hehe. Good jobb and of course your writing is awesome.

I'm reviewing! Huzzah. Hehe. Amusing story so far. Snape and his witty comments. xD Awesome job ]

w00t w00t! Great fic so far. Hey, I actually thought it was pretty cute when Snape went to visit Hermione in her head *grins* Oh no, you're slowly converting me! Hehe. So I'll be looking for some updates...Oh I loved this

“Hermione cursed by a book?” Sirius mused. “That’s irony if I ever heard it.”

XD Great stuff. Keep writing!