Sewer that was simple adorable !

It was soo cute

Awww~ sweet stuff! Fluffy and well-written (:

awww thet was sweet...i really think those 2 belongs togheter...thank you for this

Very good. I realy enjoyed reading it.

oh..what a cute and sweet piece of art..love it..laylaxyuri

good fic

need more L & Y fics on this site

blessings to u

Very well... You trully understood my feelings. I'm amazed and honored. Loved this "mind chapter". Arigatou gozaimasu for it.

Kissus

Layla-san

Okay to be honest, i wasn't going to review since you threatened to "bite and scratch" me, just to make you mad but...I also like Yuri and Layla. I like you FF, it was really good and so sweet ..

cool fic

write more Yuri/Layla fics

I LOVED THIS! There really need to be more layla and yuri fanfics! keep writing!

nice! _

Hello...

I really love ur fanfic, I hope u make another one.

Same as Yuri and Layla pairing.

I really like them and I think they're cute.

thanks.. And Hope u read it.

Bye...

That was a really cute little romantic story! I loved it! yuri and layla 4 ever!

A good story. You had a few thoughts and descriptions in there that were absolutely beautiful. My only complaints are little ones: as an authoress myself, I'm entitled, so don't kill me. I think that your detail and flow could use some work. The scenes and thoughts were wonderful, but this is a story that YOU are telling: you have to allow the readers to peer into your mind, in a sense. Try and show what EXACTLY is happening, while being careful of how you put it. Don't wanna go overboard, after all. ; (that's MY fault; you can't have it!) Anyway, my first time reading a Kaleido Star fic, and I enjoyed. Hope to see more from you!

the story was a great one. the layla-yuri pair is great still i expected the way they ended up. still i enjoyed it. i loved the leonxsora and soraxyuri pairs.