Cute story

moar please~

Aaaaaaaawwwww that was so sweet and cte

Cute :)

That was sooooo cute and I loved that part were he hates her because she likes hotaru more than him that was kawaiiiii
Pls continue writing amazing stories am a big fan of ur work

Aww.. short and cute~

NATSUME IS SHAWWWW SHWEET

This story is so sweet

Such a cute story awwwwww anyway are u still going to write You can ? Please finish it. I want to read it sooooo much. NxM 4ever

But...he only had eight reasons...

aaaaaaa,que meeeeeeeiiiiiiiiiiigooooooooooooooo.*lado natsume meigo* :3

'I hate it when I think you love Hotaru more than me…'
I think that one was my favourite. Hahaha! XD

I did notice, however, that most of the things he "hates about Mikan" aren't realy factors coming from Mikan, but more from himself. That's just how I see it though.

This was a good read, although I could have done with better grammar. Your grammar isn't horrible, don't worry, it's just that some parts of this fic need polishing. :)

Thank you for writing this though. Good job. :D

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Well, hate turned to love. How cute. It's true that when you love a person, even if there are some things that you hate about her, you will still love her no matter what. Thank you for making me realized that fact, I had forgotten it a long time ago. :D. I love this!

The fic was alright, but it would become much better if you revised the grammatical mistakes.

Thanks for the read.

this is awesome...keep up the good work!