Great read! Loved reading every chapter!

I wasn't feeling this chapter at all...

The only problem with your writing is you tend to summarize a little too much.

awe! it was very adorable.

OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY! This story is really a rollercoaster! There were so many twists and turns. The idea was absolute genius! A Sesshomaru turned human and falls in love story! I LOVED it!

Ha! Loved the chapter

Well this is interesting. Sesshomaru as a human sure would be a cruel punishment for him. I'm looking forward to seeing how he handles it. All the same, it shouldn't be too hard. After all, even if human form, he's still got the skills of a warrior, right? Inuyasha was still formidable as a human, even without his demon powers. Only time will tell I suppose.

I like all the mystery and suspense you've included, particularly in regard to what this unknown creature might be. Also I loved your description of Sesshomaru's thoughts on Rin. It was sad that she grew up and died alone, though not unreasonable and described in an effective manner. Also it's too bad, because that means all my other favorite characters from the series are gone too. Oh well. I hope we get to run into their descendants. Speaking of which, when does this take place? Are we still in the 16th century? How many years have passed since the original series?

I certainly hope all these things will be answered in due time, and Sesshomaru gets properly tested in his new human mode.

I can't tell you how moved I was in reading this, I laughed and cried my eyes out. Also felt so much anger and sadness. But most of all I fell in love with this. Thank you. You made my day. ,

I love the story. The plot is really interesting and it's well written. It was a pure plasure to read it.

i love ur story. It seems like it could actually be made into a novel. I hope u coutinue. :D

I love this story, and this chapter makes me want to cry every time I read it. It's so sad, but at the same time, so beautiful.

Ok. I just read this entire story in one day. I read this one, despite it being an OC/Sess fic because I've been reading "Her Choice". This was unbelievably good. I have NEVER liked an OC story before and this one... wow.

Sesshomaru turning human was cool but him changing while human and only then becoming youkia again made this so fantastic. I actually cried. I NEVER cry at fan fiction. That is two NEVERS so far.

Then, though I worried the whole time I read it. You actually FINISHED this. I have NEVER read a fic that I loved, where the author actually finished it. You are amazing. I want to send you flowers. I loved it that much.

I worry that every fan fiction I read from now on will pale by comparison. You have ruined everything but in the best possible way I can imagine.

Thank you so much.

I spent a whole day reading your story after finding it, I just could not stop reading. I loved your ideas, plot, everyting! Is there any hope that there will be a sequal though? Becuase there is still so much more that I need see happen in the story, for example, Sesshoumaru has not keep the promise that he made to himself that he would hunt down and kill the guy that raped Takana. However, sequal or not I loved your story!

Thank you

I just have to say...I came upon this fanfic yesterday night and I just finished it :) It was amazing! And heartfelt! And really really amazing! Ha, it made me cry too and I just loved the way that you were able to change Sesshoumaru in a realistic way while still being "in character" with him. Don't know if I made sense there, oh well.

You are an amazing author. Your story was so well written it was a great pleasure to read, not many stories have your skills and I applaud you on a job amazingly done. I am sad to see the story finished, I almost thought that Brota would have maybe changed tanaka to a youkai. Hmm, would'nt that be an interesting story- the look for finding the 'spell' to change her into a youkai.

It makes me sad because I know that Tanaka will eventually die ): and Sessh will be left alone.

Anyways, once again. Amazing detail and story telling! You wouldn't perchance want to make an Rikuo/oc story would you? Rikuo from Nura: Rise of the Yokai Clan/Nurarihyon No Mago

Once again, great story and can't wait for what you will come up with next!

I just want to say that I've Bren pillaging fanfictiondotnet for a decent sessxoc and I've found it. This story definitely deserves a he'll of a lot reviews. Your writing and character development is beyond imaginable. I love it amd really hope you'll update it even though it's been around six years, haha.