So here's the thing, I really like your plot and I love the smut scenes and your grammar is great. The only thing that kinda sucks about this is Kagame's personality. I get that she has to have some flaws for the story to progress but think about it, after years of fighting Naraku she couldn't have been as stupid as you make her out to be even if she is "distracted". She's also not self-centred, the complete opposite in fact. And the fact that she's so dumb is what pisses me off the most because alright, it's up to you, the author, to decide how OOC she is but you've repeatedly mentioned that "kagome is not usually stupid", "kagome is usually quite smart", "kagome is usually quite perceptive" etc but none of that shows in this. Not once has she made a smart choice. Literally not once.

oh I love this silly fic its fabulous and I hope you pick it back up at some point

I just went back to re-read this after many years out of the fandom! I forgot how funny it is! I know it’s been a long time, but maybe you could find the time/motivation to finish? Hell, I just finally saw the end of the series...10 years later lol. Regardless, stellar work!

Darn, not finished. Really interesting premise, too bad.

I love this so far!

Its been a while since I read this, and I'm glad I decided to look again as you added another chapter... a few years ago. :) Life tends to get in the way of our best intentions, ne? Anyways, I hope one day to see "The End" on this fanfiction. I really enjoy how much thought and feeling you put into your characters.

All the best, Kousei

I hope you finish this someday :'(

I would really like to see how this ends. It's one of the very few fics I can say have become a favorite of mine. I really hope you do finish it

So sad that this isn't completed reading it was so much FUN. C'est la vie. I thank the author for their many efforts with this story. Perhaps one day it will be completed. Cheers!

Jgjlvkydjtsidlxrj! Gah! Is this not going to be updated? I got so into it that when I came to the end I was in a bit of sick. I suppose at this point the answer is no, which is a shame. A hilarious story that had the potential to get serious. Part of me was hoping Kagome wouldn't end up with Sesshoumaru (Inuyasha was obviously never an option, the dipshit) simply because he was and is kind of an asshole, ' burgeoning feelings' for Kagome aside. The whole thing with Kouga was a great plot move if not sad wake up call for Kagome. It's a shame that all the guys interested in her are so selfish and unaware, Kouga included... Although it would have been interesting to see if that changed with Sesshoumaru. Ah well. I'll follow the story just in case. Thanks for writing!

Please Update!

Keep posting.

Can't wait for another chap plzz update soon ;p

Five years later and the end of this story has yet to come to fruition. o

Did we abandon ship, and leave the story behind? o n o

u totally suck u need to update dammit pplllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz