Reviews for deception |
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randomgirl chapter 1 . 5/15/2015 OHHH! BUUURRRRNNNN |
Hercules8 chapter 1 . 6/5/2014 I like it! :) |
d.t. mars chapter 1 . 12/20/2013 Ha! This was cute! |
Rara chapter 1 . 11/16/2012 hehehe! Cute! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 Well done. Each line of action is smartly written, the tone of the oneshot is consistent throughout, setting up a elegant, beautiful place, and two people with clashing personalities enjoying it. All for an excellent punchline at the end. For a six-year old story, that's very good. :) |
empresskitsune chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 Awww :) So cute! |
kaibasgirlx chapter 1 . 12/20/2008 That was lovely, and IC, I think XD I really enjoyed reading this ~Téa |
OCQueen chapter 1 . 4/22/2008 Taang! Yay! I have just read most of your storires interesting me from their summaries... one to go! |
10tative chapter 1 . 1/17/2008 cute! nice ending :D |
aleson chapter 1 . 12/6/2007 This is written so well, and the characterization is awesome: on-spot and with all their humor in tact. I think your punch line is very Toph-like, and you don't really need to change the fic at all. If you could write a long/chaptered fic and keep all these same qualities, that would be pretty amazing. |
PersonWhoWishesSheHadAnAccount chapter 1 . 8/31/2007 I thought theis was Taang, you tricked me! *breaks down into hysterical laughter* I LOVED IT! |
Butterfree chapter 1 . 5/1/2007 lol, it is true that Aang does look a little slow when yu first look at him ; Great little one-shot! It's really sweet ) ~ CupidKirby |
mehrunnisa chapter 1 . 4/9/2007 this is absolutely beautiful, without a doubt the best taang oneshot i've ever read. I love it, it's inspiring :). Completely in-character, especially Toph's last punchline. |
Taang-forever chapter 1 . 1/22/2007 This story is so amazing. You write really well and the characters act just like they would in the show. I liked the ending line. LOL! |
Decembers-Coldest-Rain chapter 1 . 1/5/2007 E! That was so cute, My newest obsession is 'Taang' _ *Favs* |