Reviews for deception
randomgirl chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
OHHH! BUUURRRRNNNN
Hercules8 chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
I like it! :)
d.t. mars chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Ha! This was cute!
Rara chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
hehehe! Cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Well done. Each line of action is smartly written, the tone of the oneshot is consistent throughout, setting up a elegant, beautiful place, and two people with clashing personalities enjoying it.

All for an excellent punchline at the end.

For a six-year old story, that's very good. :)
empresskitsune chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Awww :)

So cute!
kaibasgirlx chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
That was lovely, and IC, I think XD I really enjoyed reading this

~Téa
OCQueen chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Taang! Yay!

I have just read most of your storires interesting me from their summaries... one to go!
10tative chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
cute!

nice ending :D
aleson chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
This is written so well, and the characterization is awesome: on-spot and with all their humor in tact. I think your punch line is very Toph-like, and you don't really need to change the fic at all.

If you could write a long/chaptered fic and keep all these same qualities, that would be pretty amazing.
PersonWhoWishesSheHadAnAccount chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
I thought theis was Taang, you tricked me! *breaks down into hysterical laughter* I LOVED IT!
Butterfree chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
lol, it is true that Aang does look a little slow when yu first look at him ;

Great little one-shot! It's really sweet )

~ CupidKirby
mehrunnisa chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
this is absolutely beautiful, without a doubt the best taang oneshot i've ever read. I love it, it's inspiring :). Completely in-character, especially Toph's last punchline.
Taang-forever chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
This story is so amazing. You write really well and the characters act just like they would in the show. I liked the ending line. LOL!
Decembers-Coldest-Rain chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
E! That was so cute, My newest obsession is 'Taang' _

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