3 it just wow

Beautiful-one of my favorites:)

Awww. Will you write one about when she returns?

I don't think words can describe how incredibly amazing your depiction of Carth's emotions are. I mean there is so little to say because it was simply that brilliant. My mind is spinning with the extraordinarily well written and deep emotional connection you portrayed in this piece.

You were Carth, you plummeted into that twisted agonizing love, that patient suffering. You became the character and through your exceptional word play, that was magnificently inspiring and rich with underlining poetry, you simply and completely blew my mind.

You have a talent beyond all talent. You are the kind of person that makes people want to write.

You are an inspiration.

Thank you,

RLA

I woke up with a craving for a Carth fan fic, and I wanted to congratulate you on satisfying it so fully. "Of Loss and Leaders" was an incredibly poignant piece, with Carth very much in character as a "good, honest man". Beautiful, masterfully written piece.

Your stories always tug on heartstrings of mine. Whenever I am at a loss for inspiration, I read this or Bleak.

Thank you for writing such beautiful stories.

Wow. This definetly the best KotOR story I've read yet. Fantastic job. I love the way its written, just so... perfect. I love it! :D

::sob::

Ok, I'm just a huge fan of your writing, and I don't believe I'm a stalker although I've just been reading a storm from FFVII to FFX to this LOL. I just have to comment on almost every fics you wrote (I didn't play this particular game, but I'm a HUGE star wars fan who know all about this game and its characters)

It's just that you have this gift of words to actually influence your readers to feel as strongly as your character although we may not really agree with their decisions (I'm referring to your other fics's characters). Very beautifully written, and I even 'ache' for Carth Onasi. Thanks for writing and I HOPE to read your unpublished 'CidxYuffie' pairing soon!

This damn near broke my heart - in a good way. Beautifully done.

Oh the IMAGERY. I feel like I just consumed a sumptuous feast. Amazing and heartbreaking and beautifully done. (And "Carth-bag" sort of made my life.)

Very lovely, great work.

so so so wonderful. I pretty much fell madly in love with Carth Onasi when i played the first kotor and in the second one, when he tells you to tell her he's still waiting- oh, how beautiful. This was such a great look into him and i have to thank you for the gift you've given of letting me spend a bit more time with him. :)

Another amazing piece! - You captured Carth perfectly!

I love this. Very well done.

hey, wow, excellent, you can really make the reader feel carths pain, you got a gift