Your writing style reminds me vaguely of my own, in a sense, the way you portray abstract emotions in concrete images. That makes a lot of sense in my mind, therefore no one can criticize me. I really enjoyed it, even though I do think one or two lines seemed a bit choppy. That being said, I can't exactly remember which ones they were, so they were insignificant enough not to turn me off. I'll need to check out everything you've written now, guess who's not sleeping tonight

...huh... wait- What ? !

it was just a fever dream ?!

All of those ?!

Just a Freaking Dream ?!

Or was it just a Denial ?!

This was really great! Well done! :D

Oh my god, this is beautiful.

Hot and understandable. John, Dean and Sam! Let the love flow!

This was a wonderful piece. I loved every second of it. I have to admit though that the ending threw me. I really don't want to believe that he was dreaming the whole nine months. How you wrote this was wonderful because it really did feel like a dream if you looked at it one way but it also felt really real if looked at a different way.

Seriously, I'm trying to convince myself that the last line was just Dean telling himself that he was dreaming because he felt guilty about what him and Sam had been up to. That's my interpretation and I'm sticking to it. :)

I don't know, I'm probably just grasping at straws. But the end had me hooked and thinking about this story for days. It was a brilliant in every aspect. It just flowed so lovely.

Thanks for the wonderful read. Keep writing!

This is beautiful, but... did Dean dream it all? Fantastic either way.

Awww! Great job! I liked the alternating scenes

WAIT HE WAS DREAMING?

Damn that was deep and hot

The end sucked. Big time.

another amazing story...you rock my world in a really good way! I am so inspired by your writing style, I am now fan fiction stalking you LOL

Great story, I liked it :)

Thank you !

I know this story is rather dated now as far as fanfiction goes but wow what a read. Truly beautiful writing there. There isn't a moment of it that I didn't love. Your sentence structures are truly unique and engaging. There were just so many lines here I adored and could read over and over again.

This here is just magical;

"And Sam looks at him sometimes like Dean is the only thing he can see in color."

Now I just have to read everything else you've done, to see and hope that they're as wonderful.

Thank you.

I'm favouriting this because even though I have only a vague idea of what's going on, it managed to catch my attention and I reread it again and was impressed by the dynamics of the relationship of the Winchesters. Reading from Dean's POV was a particularly fresh, raw view of his thoughts and family.

The writing style left many things open to interpretation and the ending left one wondering.