Very cute. I enjoyed how their relationship developed.

This is awesome. One of the best written fics I've come across in a while. You had everyone in character and wrote these two world and the crazy happenings in them with the grace and style and word choice of a master. And everything about it was absolutely great.

Oh my, oh my...

This was..oh my!

I could give You a nice review but instead I will tell You this- I almost came reading this story...

Oh my, You NEED to write more. A LOT!

Thank You, thank You so much!

What an absolutely gorgeous story! Love your writing style, thanks for posting this! :)

omg! I just love love love this! You did a fatastic job on it!

veary good would love a update

Aww! This was nice and sweet! D

Very beautiful, wonderful work. I really appreciated how you wrote the action scenes, the way they were lost in the following world, the way the erotic scene was toned down in order to fit the circumstances... I also got the feeling that you really know a lot about freezing to death, as it was really well done. (Not that I know anything about it, I just got the feeling that I really knew how Fai felt in that situation.) There was so much beauty in this, I really should go through it again and praise every little thing that appeals to me... sorry, I'm just too tired to do it right now, but be assured that this story was very, very much appreciated. It felt very realistic and still fantastic... I loved it so, so much. :) Thanks for writing and sharing!

oh my gosh! this is so beautifully written! the plot was just pefect, neither too fast nor too slow. I love this so much! did we love that lovely ninja. fai deserves man like kurogane to hold him whole. salute for you!

That was amazing! Really hot and really cute:)

Here I am wondering why I've never come across this perfect fic at all. Such a shame. Perfect. Just perfect.

OH my god. SO cute, and very well written! I loved it.

OMG. sequel!

*fangirls for a couple minutes... and yes, fangirl IS a verb*

i do wonder, though, exactly what happened while fai was drowning. ie. what was that black thing, whether or not they found a feather (probably not, since sakura's still on her feet)

anyways, really really enjoyed reading this fic. the kurofai cuddling under scratchy blankets is simply adorable!

That was... so, so good. I love the way your explained every one of Fye's thoughts, and what made him act the way he did, and more importantly; NOT act the way he usually does. I rarely see fics which explains his reasoning in an understandable way. This was absolutely brilliant.

Amazingly sweet and touching. Wonderful job,