Reviews for Left Unsaid |
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Raven 1082 chapter 1 . 9/5/2018 XD I could totally see either one/both of them using the "I don't hate you" line. Especially Raven. Good story! |
Person chapter 1 . 12/16/2017 I loved it. This was very simple, the punctuation, spelling, and grammar was all correct, not to mention how you put it in my favorite character's point of view. I hope to see more stories like this. |
PeaceandluvBBRAE chapter 1 . 8/27/2016 Awwww. I love this so much! Adorable! I love that its not that cheesy like other stories. Wove it! Yes! Woooooove it! |
DrunkOnMusic chapter 1 . 8/9/2016 I love this so much! First off, I love the way you have with words, weaved so elegantly. Marvelous. As far as I could tell, your grammar and spelling were perfect. And finally, I love how emotionally retarded Raven can be and the adorable way they didn't use 'love' and instead used 'I don't hate you'. Brilliant |
HunterMoore chapter 1 . 12/8/2015 Great story, really enjoyed it. |
Jasperstone44 chapter 1 . 9/8/2015 Your story was absolutely amazing. You should write more raven x beastboy fanfics |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2015 This was fluffy good |
bluegreenenvy chapter 1 . 6/24/2015 *heart explodes* i have died and gone to heaven |
Lilybud chapter 1 . 6/9/2015 I think you wrote Raven perfectly! You got straight into her head, and brought out the real reason she has the hardest (or easiest) time around BB, because he WON't let her cut herself off and be "creepy" (great allusion, by the way). The critical thinking you displayed in this, and in all your works, brings the story so alive it feels like an episode of the show! I loved how you found a way to resonant all of Raven's affections for BeastBoy without making it mawkish or losing Raven's awkwardness, as it seems the only way to get Raven to confess her love is through her Emotions in her mirror-anything else feels too OCD. The rest of the Titans were well-written; especially Cyborg. In a short snippet you depicted him as the big brother who keeps everyone else leveled like he does in the show. Also, it was a critical nuance to BeastBoy's portrayal resorted to the shore as his solace, even though nobody knows why but a certain blonde girl. I did think though it would be more likely that Starfire's place of solace would be the roof, as implied in the episode with Blackfire, though that's me nit-picking. Unlike quite a few reviewers, I thought it wise that you left what Raven said to the reader's imagination. Diving straight into the thick of it somehow made the predicament more profound and tense; that moment that every human realizes that they said something they could never simply erase or pull back. An apt imagery of words not on a string, like a yo-yo! The omission also saved Raven and BB's intial fight from being overdramatic, tedious, and cliché. Overall, writing, characters, and ideas was excellently and thoughtfully done, and I spotted only one minor typo when BB said he thought Raven and him WE'RE friends, not [were friends]. |
zek-xz chapter 1 . 4/11/2015 Very nice and sweet - I won't lie, but I really want to know what she said to him. |
RavenSerendipity chapter 1 . 11/18/2014 I really really don't hate this story. :D |
BBxRAEshipper chapter 1 . 3/11/2014 This was great just wished that u said what she said, i mean it was so adorable i wished to know what she said, BUT AS I WAS SAYIN THIS IS SO CUTEEEEEEEEE! |
Blue Raven7349 chapter 1 . 1/5/2014 I spent the whole story wondering what she said to him that hurt him so much... Guess illl never know. I like it though . Especially the end. |
Me chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 That 'I deeply, truly honestly...don't hate you ' thing really cracked me up. This was great. The ending was deeply, truly, honestly...sweet! I really don't hate this story |
TheReviewer chapter 1 . 8/26/2013 The best BBxRae oneshot I have ever encountered. That is all I desire to say. |