I LOVE THIS FIC it is awesome

Aw, so so so sweet :) I really enjoyed it :)

can you please write more eiji-oishi lemons?

I loved the truth or dare part. w

we liked it somuch and please write more fiction about them

[shudders]

That was hott.

I mean, hot!

Phew.

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Why can't that be the way the real story goes?

SO NOT FAIR!

this was good.

That was hot.. And Eiji's always so cute :D.

WAI~! Amazing! Of course, seme Oishi... At first it sounded like it was going to be seme Eiji. It's not fair, you got my hopes up! Wow, that was SO lovely. Favorites, favorites! *posessed giggle*

-Kibou-chan

That was amazing! I hope that you decide to continue this.

Hmm~ It was tacky and cute! (Somehow that's meant to be a compliment. *makes a puzzled face*) What I mean is... it's like a plastic keyring! (I'm making less and less sense..!)

Mm~, as for critique, don't describe them too similarly. (Unless of course the characters are!) For example, Eiji might observe that Oishi is attractive in the way that he is bigger, broader-shouldered, etc..

Also, when writing a sex scene, you have to be mindful of ambience. Some of the phrases used were more... 'porno', than 'romantic lovemaking'. And if the guys had fancied eachother for ages, unless they'd been doing some major denial, they wouldn't likely act so extremely like "oh my god what am I thinking?"

_ I only intend for you to become stronger! I did like the fic'. Please take my review well. *bows*

lolz~ eiji's so cute! hontouni kawaii! truth or dare is quite the dangerous type of game, no? tee hee *smirk*

verry nice :)

ABSOLUTLY ADORABLE!

hi again!

OMG!

it was ver very god xP , i just love the two of them , they make sucha cute pair.