This has made me cry, made me laugh, and angry but it was a really amazing story but I know it’s not finished so can you do your loyal loving readers a favor and finish this story please please finish this story I’m begging you with all of my heart

Since you said you appreciate comments no matter how much time has passed, I figured I should make one before I fall down this rabbit hole again. To paraphrase Maya Angelou, you may not remember what someone said, you may not even remember what they did, but you remember how they made you feel. I remember this story touched me in the most devastating way. Now that enough time has passed, I wonder how my attention will differ in this reading, if at all.

I've been entranced by this story for a week now...I would have gobbled it up in a few days, but I took my time when I realized it wasn't finished. I know this story is 10 years old now, but it's incredible.

Chapter 25? Where are you

I love Wonka and Mr. Bucket's challenge, its positively entertaining.

I love how Wonka runs cirles around M and Mr. Bucket knows exactly what he's doing but no one else sees. Its absolutely fantastic! Brilliant writing, absolutely beautiful. And I love Grandma Georgina

please don't let this be a cliff hanger. I have so meany more questions that need answers please keep writing!

I absolutely love your story it's intoxicating! It's dark and twisted, it has dark taboos and fantasies that one would be jailed just thinking about. It has the dark love and history, truths and lies that makes you not want to stop reading. I was so sad when I got to the end of chapter 24 and have to wait till another chapter comes out. You are a very good writer.

I adore this story, its been such a journey.

I've been rereading it and I cried when I got to the end of this chapter just like I did a few years back. I've no idea if you have any plans to finish this but I so hope that you do! I popped over to your DA and saw you were sort of active there. I left a message for you there as well.

Please know I'm not stalking, just trying to hit a place I think you might actually see my message and oh so hopefully request! lol

Either way take care!

I'm so sad this hasn't been updated in a long time, it's amazing in so many ways. Before this Fanfiction, I never really thought about paganism, but it's really opened up a lot of things and views in my head, ones which I'm sure you aimed to evoke. It's truly a piece of art, and I praise you, and your ability to write spectacularly. Good luck if you are thinking of continuing, and I hope you continue to expand our minds with your writing :) CG

Please,please tell me you didn't give up on this,th-this was absolutely mad,amazing and really should finish this,dammit! I can't hold my exciment long enough

Okay, I know you haven't been on for at least 6 years, and I don't know if you'll ever see this, but I have to try.

YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY. PLEASE. It is SO unfair to write so beautifully, to get me emotionally attached to these characters, to build story arcs and character building with such finesse, and then HAVE NO RESOLUTION. Do you know what that's like? It's like listening to 'The Entertainer', and then not playing the last cord. I AM IN ETERNAL DISCORD RIGHT NOW.

Look, beyond the lemons, violence, or any other crazy exhilarating shenanigans, you have made Willy Wonka SUCH an interesting character. He is much more complex than the film or book ever goes into. It's a shame to leave the plot as it is.

Hope that convinces you. I'll be waiting to see what happens :)

I really really want to read the end. Please update

It would be cool of you wrote about te marriage that the buckets were goin to have and wonka and Charlie's first time ;)

I haven't left reviews only because I am so into this story that I don't want to stop an just keep on reading, it's wonderful :) so since its alost over I decided to leave a review and tell what an emotional roller costed and anxiety this has caused me and I am always looking for stories that put me on the edge to want to read more and wish deeply or a sequel :) thank you so much !