please update wonder what happens

update. update. update. update. update. update. update. update. update. update. . update. update. update. update.
UPDATE!

I want more, I really love it ;D and Scott and Marie look perfect

Loved it! Try and include Jean a bit more in the story, make her seem like the bad guy instead of Logan, I like Logan :)

Update soon please xx

i love this story! it is the best!so cute! keep updating and writing! love it! kacey

*poke* *poke* Need more! Please don't give this up and update soon!

LOVE THAT BEETLE'S SONG.

this is intense! i really hope you update soon.

Very good story, I wanna kill Logan, but very good story, hope can add to it at some point in time.

omg please update i love it so far

There are a lot of RoguexScott fics whose storyline concern Jean engaging in an affair with Logan, thus destroying her relationship with either Scott or the entire school, but you have managed to create write a story that actually expands beyond that.

At first, when I began to read it, I was almost certain it would be one of those fanfics that never get past of point of Scott's grieving state for he and Rogue to actually engage in a relationship.

Much to my delight, eight chapters into the story, Scott and Maire have built and established a romantic relationship with each other and it is wonderfully convincing. Their slow and steady progresson of friendship into that of lovers was illustrated nicely. It wasn't rushed or taken too slow, which was lovely.

I was really enjoying myself, then Logan and Jean returned and the tension begins. Like one reviewer says, we get to see Logan's POV on their relationship (full frontal), but we never see Jean's except when Scott and Rogue come out of the closet with their relationship in the Kitchen sequence. I love to see Jean's perspective on all of this.

All in all, I enjoyed reading what you've posted so far

If you ever decide to continue, I'll be around

Sakura123

loving this story!

sam

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This is great. I like it. Continue soon as you can get time. But what's Jean's responce to everything that's transpirring. So far I've seen Logan's point of view.

Nice start. I like the way you went from started in 1st person but then did a split scene and went to 3rd. Then did it again when going back to 1st person. I've read some stories where the author was doing 1st and 3rd at once and it was too confusing to read. I was never able to finish the story because it was too confusing.

i can't wait for the next chapter...and why did i have a feeling Logan wasn't having such good thought when she stepped back toward the bed? i'm just getting a bad vibe from that but okay...plz continue...