Reviews for Even When he Smiles
GhoulEater3 chapter 1 . 2/21
I strongly dislike the mental hospital addition to this. I don't know why but reading about mental hospitals can be so annoying/frustrating
Deathtoll1000 chapter 9 . 10/12/2019
aswome chapter hope next one is just as aswome as the last
Kingkong101 chapter 2 . 9/13/2019
Weak
KratostheLycan chapter 3 . 8/18/2019
that schedule is surprisingly realistic and accurate.
falsepermanence chapter 9 . 8/16/2018
honestly this story is starting to do absolutely way too much. too many OCs to the point where this doesn't even need to be set in the ninja world since it really has no relevance to ninja anything. most of the canon characters don't even seem to need to be apart of this. tsunade just completely disappeared. iruka is nowhere? orochimaru is? after not getting sasuke? like too much of canon is just shoved to the side despite being set in the canon storyline. this is more AU than anything with all the OCs and weird OOC actions of all the characters, plus all this weird stuff starting to happen like ren and the akuma stuff and whatever with miyuki and her cousin. it's just too much like im reading a story that doesn't have anything to do with the naruto world and that isn't what i came here for
Guest chapter 23 . 8/4/2018
This is sooo fucking messed up. It was really good but also horrible to witness.

Good work
Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2017
I am really grateful for this fic, I struggle with some of these things and glad when people write about them.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/8/2017
I was so sad for a moment there Jesus Christ
Guest chapter 11 . 7/6/2017
Why the fuck doesnt Tamada just go to the hokage
Midnight Child Of Prophecy chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
The best and saddest
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Angsty
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***sadistic here***
Zizi-g chapter 23 . 9/19/2016
This was, a very difficult story to read. All those intense emotions, from the first paragraph to the last... I usually avoid reading angst stories, because they make me very emotionally charged. But there are some, that as soon as I begin reading them, I can't stop even if I want to sometimes (since I know I'll be crying before I reach the end). This story is one of them. Excellent work on conveying the emonional turmoil many people feel when faced with such difficult problems. I liked that we didn't only get Naruto's perspective, but we saw the reactions others had, both when they were made aware of the situation and later, when they decided to do something about it. I wanted to share that, when I read about Naruto playing the guitar and thought about how his whole life turned out in the story, a song struck me and I had to hear it as I was reading. The song is called 'Decadence' and it's from the band Disturbed. It seemed so fitting and I couldn't get it out of my head. Now every time I hear the song, it reminds me of this story. Thank you for this unique experience! -Z
HawkeyePierceIsYourDoctor chapter 7 . 3/31/2016
This is a lovely story but yet in a sad way. I'm sorry but I don't think I can read though it anymore since this is the first fan Fic where I have cried almost four times.

I really do like it though and I'm sure you get this a lot. But the reason why I'm going to stop reading is because of the touch topic that this Fic talks about.

If I ever have the guts though to read it all next time then I'll make sure I read it though the whole way.

Until then this is not a good by. No... Fair from a good by this is only a see ya later.

And what ever you are doing with your life I just want to say good luck and stay safe.

Until I come across it again, see ya later for now.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/15/2015
Omg mah birthday is april 13
TangyCitrus chapter 23 . 9/2/2015
I cried so much and had to take breaks between reading to get to this end. This was such a difficult story to read, mostly for the mere reason of the many dark and terrible topics that is in it, but they were handled and written exceptionally well. With responsibility, delicately, and filled with the right emotions.
Even if I do have so much more to say, I don't know how to say it all, how to properly convey my thoughts and feelings about everything here and so I will just stop here.
Thank you for writing and sharing this.
Take care and have fun.
Xcherokee chapter 18 . 7/14/2015
1.i love the story
2.i love the beginning till middle the most
3. I was sorta hoping this story would be more like naruto going to therapy getting through all his dark memories and getting better. I don't really like how you put in all the super powers and Sai mom coming and destroying everybody lives. Also you put a lot of unnecessary stuff in this fic that really don't need to be there. 4
I love the white hair girl (I can't spell her name) soooo much. I want my baby naruto blond hair to grow back tho
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