I am near tears here i feel so bad for them both! You're pulling my heartstrings here.

Good hunt - and that trick with burning the bones NOT banishing the poltergeist was EVIL! Poor Sam, having Dean perform an exorcism on him - that must really be extra freaky to suddenly have someone else in your head. Yikes! So glad Sam is fixed, and home with his brother. You did good.

Wow! What a great story! Unique premise and wonderful grasp of the brothers and their relationship. Will have to check out some of your other stuff for sure.

Wow. Just read this in one sitting. It was AMAZING! Such a cool plot line! Off to see what else you have to read.

Supernatural Fanfiction Monthly Awards Review (February 2016):

A stressed out Dean, coping with what looks like brain damage but isn't. The way you used the plot devices of the poltergeist, the electricution, and the concept of a spirit as pure electricity was highly inventive. I bought it, hook, line and sinker, though I had half expected them to be interrupted as he was doing the exorcism, what with Sam screaming... That would have made things both difficult and interesting.

Definitely worth the read.

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Supernatural Fanfiction Monthly Awards: February 2016

This was an interesting take on anterograde amnesia-you must have studied Clive Wearing and HM in school, huh? I watched a documentary on one of them, I can't remember, and the sadness of the wife who couldn't share the passing years with her husband was devastating. You did an excellent job solidifying Dean's role and his side plot to go kill the spirit forever certainly supported that. I'm glad Sam recovered, because it is a certain sort of hell to live with.

Sam and Dean's characters were very well written. Your pacing was perfect for this type of story-things unfolded gradually when they needed to, and you didn't throw too much drama towards the end or the beginning. Overall, I would say this was a very well-written story-you should be proud!

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review : February 2016

With an interesting concept and a great deal of potential, this story was only let down by the lack of coherency and logical explanation in the plot, too many inconsistencies reducing the impact of the resolution. Generally speaking, hints that the problem might be other than expected (the wildly fluctuating EEG, for example) would be seeded from the beginning to add tension. Dialogue, description and action were fluid and naturalistic, and the overall presentation was good. It would seem that the site's formatting peculiarities were responsible for the multiple instances of losing spaces between words.

Fuck you this story is the best thing ever shut up I hate you I am not crying.

Great story. Lots of tension and brotherly care with a nice dose of snark. Your characterisations were spot on.

You did a fantastic job! Personally I would've liked to see some kind of confrontation with john at the end. I readily don't like him, and would've liked to see your take on his absenceat such a critical time.

Congrats! You've been rec'd at the spn_littlebro community on Livejournal!

This was a great story. Love how you made it a supernatural injury. Very well done. But, damn, so glad Sam's better!

This is a good story, well done. Scary, though. What a horrible way to live.

This was brilliant and had an amazing plot and really showed how close Dean and Sam really are. Amazing work!

Love how this story turned from brain damage to ghost possession. Nice little twist, you clever clever writer.