i really liked this fic Id love to read more of this, as ive never come across any fics like this one :) (i mean, fics where Naruto is older and Sasuke is still a kid). I hope you get a muse to keep you writing :)

Not the best fight scene, But it was alright give 7/10, But it was cute ;)

:D

does this have a sequel? OH PLEASE! SAY YES! i would love to read it.. UPDAAAATE! ! !

Nooo! No OWARI! No No NOOO! I WANT MOOOORRREEEE! Phu-lease?! *makes puppy dog eyes*

Hehehe, since when does Sasuke not get what he wants? Come on Naruto lol

i read the doujinshi 'Toshi no sa nante' already. and this story makes a great prequel to the doujinshi. awesome job.

this is the first chapter and I haven't finished reading it, yet, but gosh, please do tell me how many times are you going to repeat that sasuke is expressionless, he is stoic, he doesn't show anything... you keep repeating it so many times that it started to get on my nerves...

So did you ever make a sequel? 'Cause I'd love to read it. I looked for it, but you have so many stories that I either couldn't find it, or you never made one :)

So, yeah, I loved it :D

PLEASE let me know if you do a sequel! You should.

More pleae! That was awsome, and hot, and and . . . WRITE MORE!

Well it was a nice story I enjoyed it but I was sort of hoping for a lemon mabey you could put it in the sequel?

There were also a few mistakes and you made something unesisary things italic or bold but other then that nothing was wrong.

Awww, that was very cute!

This was such a cool idea, and the boys were adorable in it. :)

i love this story and toshi no sa nante is my fav doujin too;) plz make sequel! so excited to read it!