Reviews for What's Best for Narnia |
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kcookrose chapter 5 . 5/26 WONDERFUL! |
Glenstorm63 chapter 5 . 7/30/2019 Eeewwww! Pure fluff indeed! Your story stopped just short of bestiality in the wedding chamber. Gross. |
Hristonostore Onnediel chapter 5 . 7/10/2018 I love this story so much and these pairing are my absolute favourite pairings and they so don't get enough love and attention |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/19/2016 impecable humor |
I-Mushi chapter 5 . 11/22/2015 I'm sure I've commented on this story before while logged-in but I reread it now and still find it adorable, sweet, and so perfect. The writing is neat and quick, everyone talks in just the right manner from the books, I of course love the pairing and the characterization, and just overall the whole thing makes me smile. You wrote an awesome piece here! |
ForestGuardian311 chapter 5 . 8/9/2015 Ah, there's no good fluff like Pevensie sibling fluff, no? I'm not sure which chapter I enjoyed more...I guess all of them. XD From Peter & Susan's conversation to Peter & Edmund's coversation/playing... and then sweet Lucy, lol. Lovely work, working in the romance as well. :D Great job! |
AptlyAnonymous chapter 1 . 1/11/2015 I enjoyed this story very much, but I'm also a little confused as to when this story takes place. Then again, I'm also not familiar with Rabidash. Because the girls are getting many suitors I would think later, but they mention "until the suitors notice Lucy" which makes me think she is still too young. Edmund and Peter aren't familiar with the marriage traditions of Narnia, yet in "A Blessing of Rain" both Edmund and Peter did a fair amount of research prior to Edmund marrying Kanel and Xati. Peter mentions that Edmund is the foremost Judge of Narnia (and the story references chess and the apple orchards and obviously Narnia has a port - and thus a Navy-) which makes me think this has taken place after "They Also Serve" and "In the Lap of the Gods." Of course the Gamayun did say Orieus would marry... and have kids... Still a good story though your entire universe is so consistent this one is throwing me off a bit XD |
TheChronicler1209 chapter 5 . 1/5/2014 But then it would have been even harder for them all when they left Narnia. Never to see their loved ones again. Not even to say goodbye... |
Tauriel chapter 5 . 11/18/2013 I sat and cackled for about 23 minutes when I read this. Their brothers have tails, and my baby wears a collar; same difference! (go with it) Could you consider making this into a 'verse of it's own? I'd love to see the weddings! |
MJLupin27 chapter 5 . 7/25/2013 Jajajaja I really really enjoyed this! I love Oreius and the whole ordeal with the boys was hilarious! thanks for sharing! |
MCH chapter 5 . 6/19/2013 Lovely story about marriage and Narnia, and I do like the idea of the Queens marring their chosen ones Oreius and Tumnus. If it was good enough for CS Lewis to write that Frank's sons to married narnians then it good enough for this story. |
Eleutheria Wolf chapter 5 . 3/19/2013 This is seriously adorable. No, really- I never thought that I would really like a story about the Kings and Queens of the Golden Age getting married, but this is seriously wonderful. It's funny and seriously and just a bit heartwarming. |
Falln4DarkAngel chapter 5 . 12/26/2012 I could not stop laughing throughout this entire fic! Edmund/Peter angsty bromances are great to read...but can get very depressing and I love reading well-written fics focusing on Susan and Lucy. I also love reading Golden Age fluff. I love that Oreius can still order the two kings about even though they're about to be brothers, and "self-imposed exile to Archenland" had me lolling. Poor Edmund and Peter. It's not enough that there are thousands if not millions of fangirls after them, along with the eligible ladies of Archenland, and Narnia (just had the weirdest image of Edmund and a dwarf...O_O) but their sisters will be pushing them to get married too xD |
all4dobby chapter 5 . 2/6/2012 This story was so fun! It was well written and engaging and just plain (or not so plain) fun! |
Austra chapter 5 . 12/5/2011 Perfectly written. Indeed, your stories are by far the best of all "Narnia" stories. Thank you so much for writing. -Austra |