all I can say is you need to continue this story it is truly awesome and legend-wait-for-it-dary

Really good. Please keep going and update soon!

That was a pleasant story. It had many humorous and original scenes. Its too bad it has been discontinued.

Excellent work,

brindani

This is defintely a wierd oringal but none the less an oringal. I expect it to rise up to your other works raiden. Don't prove me wrong.

Well, this is interesting. A good dose of humor with an actual action plot. A shame this is so old. This will probably never get noticed. But what the hell.

good story!

Can't wait till next chapter :-)

I want to ask when you are gonna finnisch the next chap. I dont want to sound rude but I really like your fic.

This fic is great. I like the humor. When is next update coming, by the way. You haven't updated in three years.

-Knight Two

Good job on the story but PLEASE UPDATE I MEAN ITS LIKE BEEN 3 YEARS? Did you quit writing this story or are you putting it off for later? Well anways keep up the great work.

continue coudln't u think of a better name then chaos breaker? counds like some ff7 move. y not divine retribution or blade of souls...i souc like im high...well it was a great fic anyways

geez i know its been almost two years since youve done anything with this but would you please update this, it's an exellent peice of work that does not deserve to go unfinished

Come on man! you have to update this story it is GREAT

A very interesting story (no seriously).

Try updating cause this can still be a great fanfic. Also if you wantanyideas try looking at Final Fantasy Tactics Advance because that might give you some ideasin regard to jobs and such.

Great Story. Take your time and finish it.

Great! and i thought shinji hunting season was good...