Squel. I so want a watching of the show type of story where he tells his parents everything it can be set right after PP

It's great! I don't know if you've already written a sequel but even just leaving it here is fine! The story works out and flows fantastically, so thank you for writing it!

i would like a sequel. i loved it.

A good reveal fic, I hope you update the sequel at some point. Looking forward to more!

I'd like a sequel? This story is great and I would want reviews for it also! :D
As I'm reading this in imagining it in my head and everyone ( for the most part) is in character. I hope there's more!
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Excellent story. I liked the balance you used.

I'd love to see a sequel! I love the story! The writing was a little rushed in the beginning but it got much better by the end. I love this story. It's so good to finally see a story about AFTER Maddie finds out, most stories end shortly after and don't tell how life is for everyone after she knows.

Totally rocking Fan Fic! You have my compliments! :D

The story was great. I could really feel the characters.

*screams like the little phan girl she is*

LUVES THIS!

I wanna see a sequel! This thing is really well written. It's good to finally see it complete. Though I do wonder if you meant for that bit from Jack's perspective to be there a few chapters back.

Please do a sequel!

I was really quite impressed.

At first, I wasn't sure I liked the story, but your skills seemed to dramatically improve with each chapter. Fewer grammatical errors. Higher vocabulary. More details visuals. Smoother transitions. Etc. Really very well done by the end.

Speaking of which, there seems to be a general consensus for a continuation and I admit I agree. It would be nice to read your take on how Danny would deal with his mother's deal and Jack's reaction. I do understand that the ending you have is quite good and leaves that to the imagination of the reader; I enjoy it as it is now. The continuation plea seems to be more out of curiosity than anything else.

That aside, well done.

Only one word can describe this story in the long run: Awesome!

I've taken pitty on you. This was an amazing story. Keep it up.