Great job

oh, i absolutely adore minato the akatsuki leader!

Good story, although Minato's reasoning for leaving the village was a little strange. I guess grief makes a person do crazy things. However a far more original plot than most “Return of the father” fics I have read. Good work.

lol

"Wow..."

haha i like that.

this was really beautiful!

And I loved your ending!

It lets everything open and my imagination is turning wild

thank you for this great story!

please continue the story it is so good

It starts out nicely, but the ending just doesn't make any sense at all.

You're really railroading the plot here. Minato's reasoning literally makes no sense. Konoha won't accept Naruto if they know he's the Hokage's son? Huh? Asuma and Konohamaru do alright. Minato's solution is to run away and hide? Huh? It's just strange.

great story .

Good ending to the story, deffinitly wasn't what I was expecting. Well..that's all I gotta say, sad the fic is over and great job with keeping it up. -Rina

this was good

:O! ok, so, Minato Pein/Loki... kinda knew that. but, didn't know he had a beard

i was not expecting the end to be then, but you know, it was almost a forshadow, so i like it. very well done.

hey, i think the story is awsome.

idk if you wanted it to be completely fiction or what, but Uzumake Kayaku actually did die and a guy named Pein or something is the leader of akatski

actually the fouth's name is Uzumaki Kayaku.

Nice, calm ending.

Perfect for this type of story. This is really been your longest fic *checks*

So it has!

Haha, awesome job as always.