I absolutely loved reading this! wonderful writing!

Sorry, don't hate me forever, but I'm probably going to review many chapters of this story.

I am super confused right now, no idea what's going on. But um...otherwise I like it, so I'll keep reading...

Umm, that was pretty incredible. I don't know why that tickled my fancy so much, but it really was very amazing.

I think this has opened my eyes to a whole new ship... Wow, I could ship. I've never done anything like that in my life.

Good job. Looking forward to reading more of your writings

i'll be waiting for that sequel! :) hehe..good job! i loved it!

The End? No! Oh, wait, you said you might do a sequel, so I guess that's okay.

I don't actually have much to say that I didn't say during the course of the fic. I like that not everything was completely tied up with a bow. You came to a definite stopping point, but the characters' issues are still their issues. And I loved the moment where Maureen asks who would want a boyfriend and Roger raises his hand. Heh.

I

FREAKING

LOVED

IT

omgsh.

The ending was adorable!

you better write a sequel!

ohh cute ending as usual. if you did do a sequel, what would it be about? and is that really how you say dad in hebrew?

keep writing!:)

So much cuteness crammed into one little (-ish...) story! I...just...LOVE! This was beyond adorable! Honestly, it was worth the wait to see this ending :)

But a sequel? That would be nice. You know, explain a few issues like Mark's cutting or if Mimi and Mark would keep getting along (becuase somehow I don't see it. Who knows, you're definitely a good enough author to persuade me :) ).

You have made me quite happy today :) Thank you, thank you, thank you!

~Mel

P.S. is it wierd that when i saw 'aba' i started singing the stupid 'aba ima, ima aba' song from hebrew school? Probably...

So Mark doesn't want to be involved in the kids life? I sence a fight coming on between Mark and Roger. I do love greatly how Mark, Roger and Mimi are all together. That does make very happe. Mimi was killed off and Mark isn't alone, they are all together, and it works out well... Keep the work, I can't wait to read more...

ohh that is the sweetest thing in the world.

"Aba"

Onoes! It's over!

I have to admit that I didn't like this one as much as your others. I don't think it's among your best works. That's ok though, because you can't have a winner every single time, eh? It was still a wonderful piece, and you concluded it perfectly. I do hope to see more.

Cheers! Zy

Another wonderful story that I enjoyed reading. Nice ending, too. Great job!

omg its over! no! great job though!

I've read the entire story and this is definitely one of my favorite chapters. i loved all of it! especially the end. i like when people actually include mark's jewish heritage! :)

Oh. My. God. Best story EVER. I LOVE it. Please write a sequel!