Good story.

bueno no esta mal aunque me hubiera gustado que orihime sea un espada completo XD

I love this so much

Kawaii! Not bad at all!

Aww. That last one was so cute! Although the idea in the beginning made me reluctant to finish, the end product really was highly creative and well written. Please write more!

this fanfic is sooo gud! normally i dnt really read these 20 truth things but i luv this 1! please write another one! want to see ichigo and yea reactions

This is a great little story. I'm a big fan of Orihime turned into an arrancar by Aizen. Don't know if it'll happen, but I can her hiding a hollow hole under her uniform.

Good job. #20 is just such a great way to end it. Very bittersweet and definitely tragic.

I think this is clever.

The way you use the characters are interesting and the way you write it does make it seem like a kind of confession.

Ah! I would love Kubo too if Orihime was turned into an arrancar. That would be a good twist. Actually, I think GrimmHime is quite a popular pairing. And although YammixOrihime seems impossible, there are no limits to fandom!

Have you ever thought about UlquiorraxOrihime? I always find that pairing interesting.

Have you read Bleach lately? You should! It's at if you aren't sure where to look.

Come back soon! :D

sad, but true !

In... ter... esting...

Holy. 12 just cracked me up so badly... xD And 3. And 11. - 10. is touching. This is a very nice piece. There's... softness...? A warm fuzzy feeling-ish. Or thereabouts. I'm not making much sense am I? But the point is I like this a lot.

Keep up the high standard! x3

Wow, that was quite an awesome idea and a great execution of it that you've got going there.

Having read much, much ahead in the manga before coming across this story, I must say that your idea for the alternate Universe in this piece is quite amazing. The sheer notion of Orihime turning Arrancar and switching her loyalties to Aizen's group instead of her previous friends is a bit preposterous to me but whatever works for this story works for me as well. Another thing that I couldn't see happening was Grimmjow coming to terms with his exclusion from the Espada under any circumstance whatsoever, but, again, it is all for the sake of the charm of them AU stories, so long live creative ideas.

All the same, this story is permeated with your awesome style, ground out by your perfectly trained hand and is beyond simple superbness. It is truly marvelous and I adore it, especially the bittersweet ending line. Sublime!

I love this, the whole idea of Orihime becoming a loyal arrancar. I think you got her character down pat! Kudos to you for that, I wish tite kubo would so make that happen! I really like how you made this, great job!

some made me laugh, others made me feel that really yucky feeling you get in your stomach when things change that you don't want changed.

however, number three was really well done.

the whole thing was well done actually. good job. I just liked number three the best.

Totally loved it. Somehow having Orihime become one of the arrancar and wanting to fight her friends is totally cool.