My God, I read all this fic in two days...
I know you havent's update in years, and probably this fic is out of your mind by now, but I have to say I loved it, every chapter, every moment... It was hearbroking at the beggining but it got better, and better...
I could continue telling all of the stuff I liked, but I'm a little tired right now and I can't even write properly. But you must know I love this story and, if you both decided to finish it one day, I'll be there!

Great Story! Update please?

I'm starting to regret reading this... I didn't realize the story wasn't finished yet. I figured by how many chapters there it would have had and ending but now since the last addition was August 2014, but now it's 2018 I'm stuck with the realization that this story will probably never be finished which really sucks cuz I really want to know how it ends! :(

Seems far to much like a rehash, epecially if the sequel is 20 years in the future...

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Thank you so much for writing this "very original" well-plotted( ? *winks* ) fanfic ! :)

Wow...just wow. I have never seen Obi-Wan going "this" dark ! XD
And...oh, poor Anakin...

Having read 13 chapters so far, the only complaint is...it seems it is going to be a ( long ? ) while before Obi-Wan and Anakin meet each other again... T_T

By the way...is this fic posted to exactly the same as the one posted to Adult ?

Now...I am going to read the rest of the chapters, then... :)
Hmm, I love you writing style, btw. ;)

Update ? Plz!

Rape as plot... how delightfully... original...

UPPPP! Pls?

There's conflict in Obi Wan's soul? What will that mean in the future?

I love this! Your writing is awesome, please keep writing, can't wait to know what happens next!

this is a most excellent story; you certainly have a unique mind; I have never really seen a 'good' Anakin 'Evil' Obi-wan fic of this magnitude before - the others , if any, are only 3000 words long.

Your structuring and playing around with how the Jedi are acting in the wake of Order 66, I think is exceedingly accurate. for one I know that up until 1000 BBY, it was still custom for Jedi to have children and Families. of course those that wanted to be popular with the council followed the 'code' [which by that point was perverted by a hermitagous old prick, that had an odd obsession for sith artifacts, and a craving for books]; such as the 'Bitc*' Satile [really her poor son; really should've met up with revan and inherited the line of Revan, and stuck the Revanichist blade up her arse for abandoning him, just for a position on the council]

Yoda however was one of those ambitious Jedi raised by those 'fanatics' after the wake of the 'Last Battle of Ruusan.' as all the 'intelligent' Jedi had been wiped out by the sith, because Lord Hoth was so dumb that he put all the best Republican forces and Jedi on one bloody planet, where a bunch of Sith Cultists sat with soul trapping Armageddon bombs.

So I think that perhaps to break away from the teachings of the Jedi; Anakin discovers Revan [or one of his holocrons] who teaches him the power of a unified force [which is really powered by emotions, with love and passion, being the most powerful there are] classified as 'Grey Knight' training; which potentially Quigon could also teach him [Quigon was perhaps one of the last Grey Jedi of the Jedi Order - seeing as Dooku became sith just after his death - ending their long line of reactionary ideals amongst the conservative fops].

If anything I will continue to keep my eye [or both] on this fanfic; top job.

Kunneg_Andris

PS: I have also noted, in my personal research that Revans policies were sought with the establishment of an Imperium, that would be forged to destroy the Sith Empire. Perhaps Anakin could form this, under an electional monarchy, in opposition to the rising Yousan Vong, that the Chiss are worried about [he could be contacted by Thrawn, and that guy is so brilliant he should be with the good guys].

Nice interlude!

In fact, I think a Yoda quote - and the only real one that makes any sense - sums it up, "You must unlearn what you have learned."

And that is what the Old order's remnants need to do from here on in if they are to survive. Especially Yoda.

And the little talk Anakin had with Serra definitely put things in their new - and proper - perspective. Anakin may have a ways to go before he can really be at the rank of Jedi Grand-Master, but when it comes to bonds and relationships, he *is* the Grand-Master, and learn from him all Jedis should.

With Serra finding love in the Rebellion - call it wishful thinking on my part, but who's to say that a certain cowboy Jedi from an upcoming animated series can't be a likely candidate? I think that might have some possibilities.

But like I said, it's just wishful thinking.

Nice setup for the next chapters to follow, and I still hope that Shaak Ti and Aayla drop in from time to time to see how Anakin and his family are doing, since at least those two are trustworthy. But of course, it depends on where everybody's gonna settle down to hide until the Empire can be taken down for good.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Well done. Probably my favorite chapter so far because it shows a bond more than relationship. It shows a human side of the Jedi and it shows a side of Serra thst I never expected. Love it

aw what a lovely interesting interlude here and I liked how we got to get to know Serra and what she is thinking more and Anakin gave her strong words and hopefully she'll find someone to love like Anakin has with Padme and I like this friendship she has with Anakin :)