Please next chapter ima beggen

lol wut? xD

One of the cutest things I've ever read! x3

So... SWEET! I love this story!

I realize I'm writing this review like five years after this story was published.

...whatever.

Oh gosh.

This is /adorable/.

It's true- a lot of the things that happened were sudden, and seemed a little meaningless. Like, the fight. Silver probably would have provoked /anyone/ more, no matter the personality, before they rushed to violence. And the kiss. But I could understand the second one a bit.

Since, I guess, when one gets put through an experience like that, one gets a shock, sort of. And if it's with another person, one sort of grows more attached to them, so I could understand that. :3 But the fight /was/ a bit sudden, natch.

Still, it was cute. Approval from me~!

~K~

My friggen OTP! I LOVE THIS!

This was a nice story! The sudden fight between the two was a little awkward, but then it went on smoothly! I liked the way you portray Silver as secretly caring, yet so unwilling to admit it! I'd love to see more of this!

Aww... so cute! .

Random: sighs dreamily Ah...THIS WORLD NEEDS MORE OF THIS!

Silver and Gold: ...

...How are they suddenly gay? This shit is the same yaoi stuff I read all the time. Suddenly two males turn gay because they are in close proximity.

Terrible.

Luv it! i say a secound chapter is needed!

o You can use the manga as the guide to their personalities x

I promote the making of a second chapter.

As soon as possible.

LIEK NAO.

Absolutely stupendous! Excellent use of imagery and fluff! I would really like to see a second chapter...how soon can you cook one up?

AWESOME! :D

ohmygod, I just love this story!

Now I have to find more Gold x Silver stuuf. x)

Keep up the good work!

OMG I LOVE YOU. There is so little of this ship and I'm so glad I found it!

Wonderful fluff...ableit rushed, but who cares?