| Reviews for First Kiss |
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   anon11555 chapter 1 . 1/8/2010 lol! strangah XD this was awesome and really cute, nice work D |
| Natureboy3 chapter 1 . 7/16/2009 The merchant is good at ruining the moment! XD Awesome job! |
| Tyrant wolf chapter 1 . 6/29/2009 hilarious endingXD |
| KittenKez chapter 1 . 12/31/2007 That was a great read! hehe! Leon/Ashley 4eva! ~*Kex*~ |
| Lexi Anima Difensore chapter 1 . 12/18/2007 Love it just i love it.) |
| Bhree-chan chapter 1 . 9/11/2007 hee! that was really good. Can she do more than just squeeze? |
| faamfam chapter 1 . 9/11/2007 I love this story, it's beautifully written and you've captured the personalities right down. Everything to the atmosphere you have written was very admiring. Please write more if you can. |
| Link of the Hyrulians chapter 1 . 9/5/2007 An interesting and sweet story. Heartwarmingly written, if a few clichés, but an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing your fantasy- it's a beautiful, if a little facetious one. |
| Heart's Replacement chapter 1 . 8/20/2007 I wonder.. what happened when the merchant did not interrupt their sweet heavenly situation...? Hehe... |
| Sumi Arana chapter 1 . 8/15/2007 Aww! OMG. Just adorable. That's the only word for it. |
| MasqueradingDragon chapter 1 . 6/28/2007 Aw! Cute! |
| FaunaTrot chapter 1 . 4/5/2007 ashley not only got to smooch leon, she got to grab his ass! lucky lucky! btw, love the story, it was short, true to the characters and done perfectly, not overdone. you should write more about them. |
| Ingu chapter 1 . 4/1/2007 Aw. lol. Loved that, it was so solemn and sad in the beginning, but the ending. lol. Cheeky Ashley. Loved the story. _ |
| Google Girl11 chapter 1 . 12/2/2006 When I was reading this I liked the beginning, but then I got to the part where she was asking him to be her first kiss and I was like- "What? 20 years old and not a first kiss?" But then I got to the ending and I laughed...not sure if that's what you wanted but, I liked it...it was cute...and I love the pairing... |
| Georgina Summer chapter 1 . 11/26/2006 WoW! YOUR STORY WAS SO GREAT i LIKE IT ALOT! |
