That's what she deserved

Beautiful )

Hahaha!

Oh, would that all Sues were so compliant.

Thank you,

of all mary sue stories on , I think the "(insert female name here) is a lonely girl who suddenly stumbles into a magical land called Narnia in the midst of the golden era and meets King Peter" story is the absolute WORST. Followed by the "random people based off of the author's perception of himself/herself fall into narnia"

YES she died. HaHA

I LOVE THIS! FINALLY! A Sue got what she deserved! POOR PETER! I say let 'em ALL plummit to their deaths (the Sue's of course)! :)

You hooked me around "What do I do to deserve this?"

Poor dear Peter. I want to see how Eddie handles them *grins*

That was beautiful. I adored that lovely ending, and I'd like to recommend "My Life As A Mary Sue" by Rhea Silverkeys, where the heroine (would that title never be bestowed upon a Mary Sue) meets an equally satisfying death. Anyway, I adored it!

-SMARTALIENQT :)

ROFL. What a perfect shot. I love this. I've seen way too many of these floating around. I mean, after a while all these _character_ with peachy, brilliant and blasted blah. I loved the bit where she trips and falls. _

THANK YOU!

ahahahahaha! why is it that everyone must have ruby red hair and emerald eyes these days? as well as ivory pale skin? i mean, whats wrong with, say, brown hair and eyes, or tan skin, or something like that? it's so effing annoying!

oh, and i love the "woman-like creature" bit! lol!

-tac

This is the first time Ive read A Mary Sue story Iwas laughing so hard Iwas crying so funny

Bwua-ha-ha!

You just gotta love Mary-Sue bashing fics, and this is a pretty good one. :)

You, and all other Sue-bashers like you, are brilliant. I don't think I've ever actually come across a Mary-Sue, but if I do, I will revies and send her to you.

Huzzah for killing off the Mary Sue! LOL Poor Peter, being plauged by those horrid creatures. Good job in writting, though it was a silly story.