This is a little late, but I read this story awhile back and just stumbled upon it again. I loved, and still love, this story. It's one of the best yorusoi lemons I've read, and it makes sense. Thank you for making this, and please come back to the yorusoi world?
xx Diamond

That was awesome.

I finally came back to re read this fic after a long browsing of others, it still hit me as hard as it did my first go around and probably will every time. Honestly I think this might be the most quintessential yuro/soi fic ever . So with that I shameless beg you to come back to what it i you d best...the world of yuri/soi misses you.

Hi :-)

I have to say, your story is amazing! I love how you expressed the conflicted emotions dwelling within Yoruichi and the way she tries to at least once show Suì how much she actually means to her - even if it's meant as a goodbye.

The pace you chose is well balanced - it doesn't happen too fast nor too slow. And I like how you managed to put their night together into the canon plot. It doesn't appear far-fetched but rather as a believable conclusion Yoruichi has found.

Plus, the end was really heart-wrenching! :-O I like this story and I've read it a few times until now :-D Keep up the good work!

Amazing job, the whole thing was fantastic.

Wow... This was SO BEAUTIFUL, gawd the ending killed me! 3 The characters were so fitting, i mean everything! The way they thought and reacted... this was amazing, thank you!

This is beautiful. Honestly the best Yorusoi fanfic I've ever read. ]

This is exactly my cup of tea...but I feel kinda guilty because i read this story a while back but never got around to reviewing so I just got finished rereading it so now i can give a proper (and long over due) review:

I loved it everything about this fic. It was almost perfect (almost because of the constant and possible over use of '...' but that's just my opinion over all it was amazingly written) the ending made me cry. Yoruichi's emotions were really visiable and my heart goes out to her :'( i honestly believe this should have been an episode (cutting the sex out of course).

Excellent work X3

Amazing story, expressed so much of what I've held Yuruichi and Soi Fon's relationship to be in such simple and effective words while mixing it with the bittersweetness that has always plagued the fans of this couple. Keep up the good work, the world needs more writers with your insight.

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it was very sweet

would you pls pls pls consider making a sequel?

My first time reading Yuri, and, I have to say thank you, for not grossing me out; I enjoyed reading this fic, it almost made cry :P

the ending made me cry

that was so mesmorising

belle x

So sad! It was great and everything, but that was really really just sad! -weeps-

Aw...that was so...cute...