I think this is such an interesting piece. I've never really thought of Al and Riza like that. I like this one a lot!

GAH! It's so angtsy! *tear* I'm... I'm... so proud of you!

No, seriously, though, this was great. I love the way she stands out from the rest, oh and bonus points for such a great vocublary. I cought 'fornlorn' and 'cranes' in there! Superb!

-Ash (you suedo big sister) ;)

LOVE IT! GO SE! Sorry that I have to make this short, but I kinda snuck on the puter. Yeah.

It's kinda more confusing than me in ways. I'm new to the series and blah, blah, BLAH! But whatever, I know I liked it It was sad, but pretty, and... yeah.

Al/Riza. Perfect :) I think I love you, too!