Oh god, poor Runda

Ooh aah. I very much likes it. Update soon. *adds to alerts*

I really like this story so far. Are you going to update it soon? You've done a wonderful job. I like the name "Runda" for Macavity, and 'Macavity,' I think, you've written in as his fourth name? Nice.

This is intriguing, I've always been interested in well written Cats fanfics. I particularly enjoyed the Twins finishing each other's sentances; I can't remember if they're known for doing that, but you handled it deftly.

Perfect, absolutly perfect the way you portrayed Tantomile and Coricopat. Anyways, I love the relationship you've build between 'Macavity' and Munkustrap. Very good. I never knew cats had a fourth name? Anyways, bravo! (puts on alert list).

Okie-dokie, you ask, Ekwy delivers. :)

First of all: Oh YES, you're definitely a good writer. No warnings here! This is an excellent idea and very well done, so the only thing you really have to worry about is spelling and grammar. Now, it's spelled "PROLOGUE," nothing else. And this sentence has got improper punctuation:

“Runda, you’re floating.” Breathed Tugger.

should be:

“Runda, you’re floating,” breathed Tugger.

That particular error shows up occasionally around the place. Watch that. :) Those the only things that really annoyed me.

I have to say I really love the little "precognitions" in the narrative. Like mentioning Munkustrap's glare and how it will be perfected, and Tugger's eyes making queens swoon... It makes me smile when I read it. I've also always been a sucker for using bits of relevant poems in the beginning of the stories, like you do with T. and Shakespeare.

I like your characterizations a lot. The young toms are adorable, but you can still make out what kind of person they will become when they're growing up. Though about this whole "moons" thing to give us their age... One moon is one year, if we're going by human age, correct? I just want to make that clear. I know it's annoying to not being able to just say "yeah, he's fifteen years old and has just started to notice girls," without people pointing out that in cat years he would be well into his retirement by then... :/

The dream was properly scary and very well written. Couldn't have done it better myself. I'm looking forward to read more from you.

Love,

Ekwy.

I love Cats. This is a very story my dear, and I glad to see/hear/read some of your work again. I recently saw Cats again at our local threatre when they preformed it this summer. For a low budget production they did a good job. I updated Through the Broken Looking Glass a while ago. TTFN.

Riddler.

It's good, Sam...do you mind if I don't read this, you know that Macavity isn't my favourite character...ill read it if you want me to...but its good writing, its just...meh...you know what i mean

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No, I shant let you abandon your other fanfiction of which I was enjoying so much!

Anyways, I love a Macavity story considering he's my favorite character. I adored that ending line and once again your stories have an excellent, refreashing - so to speak - voice of writing. There were only two mistakes I noticed and one was in the fourth paragraph where you wrote: "wasthe tabbywho..." Just a little mess up. Another thing that doesn't need to be done, but I personaly think the story runs smoother with, is in the line "had had little or no interest in kittens" you only need one 'had' to get your point across.

I'm so excited you updated another CATS fan fiction and I do hope you continue your last.