continualo me gusto esta aventura que tu creastes tienes buen imaginacion espero un nuevo capitulo

the idea for this was really good but the execution was just a little too sloppy, like you said, for me to really get into it. too much as happening for me to really understand or be interested in it

Update

The fan is about half a ton

Very good chapter, i love this story. i hope that someday the continues, greetings.

este fanfic esta increible buen trabajo y continualo seria una lastima que quedara inconcluso.

if you don't know yet the leader of Ame at that time was Hanzo but later on was killed by pein becoming the new leader as for kusa i don't really know

So I guess this chapter really did make you give up on the story, oh well. It was fun.

a traveling Ramen Vendor? or a traveling Kamen Rider, I'd be sure to remember that...

kaze-hokage, or if you decided to be clever about the translation: hot air shadow.

and then Temari looks it up, and discovers Kankuro's paint really means that. Which also explains why he changes the pattern later on.

You made something similar to Dan's jutsu and Madara's Limbo with Masamuri's bloodline - five years before Kishimoto!

As for gold, it's Gaara's main weakness, as we now know.

This is an interesting story, I am excited to read more. :3

Bro you have got to revive this... This fic has the potential to become one of the best naruto fics on the site, it just needs more story. I am so in love with it, and you have made Naruto fit into the Suna squad like a piece of the puzzle. Please pick it back up? It would be a very youthful thing to do!

Aw man this is your best story and you left it what a shame. All the good naruto fanfics stop to soon and the bads ones multiply. Now it's back to the realm of crappy harems rushed op narutos and OCs with bashing and high school aus. You sir will be missed by many it was good while it lasted and you deserve a pat on the back hope you continue cause this is outstanding.

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