Despite the silly title, this was so profound and gritty, I loved it. Jinx is so in-character and her interactions with Kid Flash just crackle off the page (or screen, as the case my be). Jinx's confusion and frustration at the world are very, very believable. I'm so glad I found this.

~Amulet

I love your writing style :)

Short and sweet! I just love how totally in character it all is. :) Although this is from the way, way back it still holds up among some of the best KF/Jinx I've read.

I had wondered. Thanks for filling in the places on the map that had been the purview previously of sea monsters and wind gods.

You NAILED Jinx's character, too.

aw isn't flash sweet love this one ofthe best i'll ever read

LOVE!

Loved it. They were both in-character.

aww, this is cute. And KF is right, who DOESN'T like pie?

Loved it, poor Jinx has such a hard time comming to gripps with her feelings about her self and others. Great story I loved it.

You are awesome for not writing Jinx like a helpless lovey dovey girl most fanfic writers enjoy doing. Rock on. :D

Nice. Good emotions. Well written. A very good job with the basic plot-line.

:) Nice, funny, sweet, and pie.

this is a good story! i liked it alot! its short but its really good..please! make another! i would be really happy if you did! thanx!

damn good piece of pie indeed. just watched lightspeed today and it completely ROCKS. reeks of jinx and kid flash. whe. i love that episode. anyway. yes. wonderful writing, present tense makes it an interesting switch and... pie! i love pie!

it reminds me of the part where mammoth is looking kid flash who's run amok in their base and suddenly the television shows pie spinning slowly in the air and he goes 'oh! pie...!'

rabid fascinations with pies. i love them crusty buggers. _ thanks for writing! cookies for the author? or would you prefer pie? hahahaha

Please update more chapters this such a good story