Reviews for The Twist of Time
ArMok chapter 10 . 6/20
If you're still monitoring this fic, i just wanna say THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. I don't know why the lack of review but i think this is an AMAZING fic! Some of the most satisfying, for me. Have some flawas and some point which i think a bit too overwhelming, a lot of gift/power/details. And i'm a bit disturbed by the fact the horcruxes are not destroyed by the basilisk and godric's sword. For me it add's the authenticity. They got to battle/tame basilisk. And it shows harry/James as true heir of Gryffindor. Avada is nice & simple, but tad too simple i think. But for all of it, this is amazing. I love the pack, the den, their friendship. Still think it a bit too much, but all in all i'm happy they're happy. Definitely gonna read the next one if you write it. Again, THANK YOU!
Leia chapter 1 . 5/21
Its not purple, its beige! Love the story!
Neumzie chapter 10 . 4/3
i was just waiting for james to offer harry to stay with them for the summer. after all, charles knows there's something up and james knows harry likely hasn't been there. i really hope you did that in the sequel lol
Neumzie chapter 2 . 4/2
ok, it definitely would've been better if i hadn't actually read DV before reading this because it seems to take so little from it. i would honestly it's less of a true crossover and more DV-borrowing of a couple aspects. it seems like it's basically canon with danger, especially since it seems the Pack (and Pride), the most central motifs in that series, are nonexistent for them. i mean, no mention at all of draco or meghan, hello! *sigh* damn dude, i literally read the entire dangerverse so that i could read this and not be lost. i still enjoyed that (when i wasn't sobbing) but now i'm annoyed that i didn't know how little would be taken
Neumzie chapter 1 . 4/2
i don't really see any connection to the dangerverse? like, this was written right after dealing with danger (3rd and 4th years), and there's been no mention of remus at all who is the central character in the series (along with danger). like, i would expect harry and hermione to at least consider him. i get that you didn't know for sure how the DV would deal with 5th year on, but this is more like canon characters going back. unless that's what this is, almost like a prequel stage-setter AU for DV? i guess i'll see
katscyborgs chapter 4 . 2/26
Lovely so far! I only just started reading it and I'm nearly halfway through.
Harrypotter84 chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
Ginny Weasley is a whore. I hate her.
G chapter 2 . 7/8/2019
Wow Dumbledore isn't too bright in this one huh? "By your expression it didn't (happen) in your time?" No really, and the fact that Hermione Granger exists wasn't his first clue? Be a bit hard for them to produce a baby years after they died wouldn't it? lol
Dolly chapter 2 . 8/16/2017
All I can think of is Danger going into Slytherin and STILL being friends with the four and people being really confused when instead of going straight to the green and silver table full of sneers and glares towards everyone at her sisters table after her sorting she heads straight for he Gryffindors and just plops down next to her sister and they just casually start eating
Fatsailor2 chapter 5 . 4/19/2017
...aw sweet lily
YuunaFiction chapter 10 . 1/19/2017
I liked it, cute story all in all.
Nocturnal Storyteller chapter 10 . 7/3/2016
I love this story.
Damy Blake Potter chapter 6 . 3/13/2016
awesome
Guest chapter 7 . 12/11/2015
Her name is Danger.
Remus told her to stay safe.
Honestly you need to sort out your priorities.
Maraduersforever chapter 10 . 3/14/2015
Great!
Awesome!
There are no words just remarkable!
Love it :')
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