Everything was well written. I love how you managed to describe the character's actions and poses so good without a single set of awkward sentences. Their thoughts were well laid out, and the reader could easily understand the situation. Writing in third person seems like your best style.

With the bit of religious style and the part with the priest... it was beautiful! The story can be related with many other people, and the plot that you have created... very good!

It was a very beautiful story. The way sasuke are portrayed was really unexpectedly good. Really good story! I'm happy I read it

This might be the best story with a religious, Catholic, theme I've read. Thanks for writing. :)

*fans self* yes! Hot! Very hot.

Absolutely adored this fic!
I was brought up catholic but im bi so this fic really hit home. That priest was great though; Love is most certainly not a sin.
Greaat read :)

This is my second time reading this. And I forgot to live a review, so here we are. I like it, but the lines are bit long. And some of it, I feel that it's already unnecessary. But still, I like it.

I am catholic I see nothing wrong with it personally I am lesbian and I guess you could say not all catholics are religious a**holes

Im not saying i hate Catholics its just im pansexual and ive been mad about this bullshit of how bad it is to love the same sex.I mean i dont go sleeping around with ur pansexual u love a person for theie personality not for the way they look and yes a persons gender is also thier and love the first chapter.

This is a fantastic story!

Really well written too! _

I loved it, and I think I'll like your others too

XD I always love re-reading this is so cute!

Haha, I very much enjoyed this story. Now if only I could make those other people at my church to see things like your priest... I'm not sure that priest would have been allowed to stay at my former church... Hmm... XD

I used to be Catholic, I changed my venue, and I can clearly remember wondering why in the world it was such a bad thing to like someone "like you." I was only about seven at the time, mind you, so a big word like homosexuality just passed through one ear and out the other. I still don't get it... But where I go now seems much more willing to just accept and move one. I am very amused so far.

Oh. My. God.

You rock!

It was so hot, I squirmed on my seat. (I was reading it while at work, heh).

Your fic is seriously well-written!

I loved this story :D Great job!

This chapter is just...there not enough words to conjure up that really describes what i feel about this one. Its just so fantastic that my squeels were heard all down my street and throughout my neighborhood. _ But I definately loved the preist in this chapter for sure, he knew about the religious struggle decision, but let Sasuke choose for himself, and told him to go for it. YAY! Ha, its nice to see a girly scared Sasuke once in a while, throught a story, its pretty comical to see really. OHMAHGEEBUS!Lemon -drools;; that just speaks for itself. Its wonderfully written, and I aplaud you once more for it being so awesome. Aw, the ending was so cute. and I can't wait to see some more from you again! :D

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