This made me laugh so hard I had to take a break from reading it. Awesome job!

Awwwww

I have very much enjoyed reading about your version of the Tonks family, this was a lovely story and I wish Andromeda was there more for Sirius when the Potters were killed. Thanks for sharing.

This fiction is actually brilliant. Tedromeda is my favourite ship and this fiction actually fits everything and I believe if Sirius wasn't thrown into Azkaban this conversation might actually happen.

This was both hilarious and really serious at the same time. Loved how Sirius used Dora to pick up girls xD

That was a sweet one shot, especially with the very brief flashback to Andromeda's childhood questions. I like how Tonks learned and retold stories like an actual child. It didn't involve babytalk at all. This is a good piece.

I like this story,
thank you for writing it.
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This was brilliant! I am slowly getting through your "Keen Observer" and thought I would check out your other work as a break. I have not been disappointed. Your characterization is fantastic, and you add enough humor throughout the story that I am laughing aloud even though we are getting to the serious topic of children picking up derogatory slurs. I thought the ending was a bit abrupt, but really your writing is just spectacular. Actually, the Blacks are my favourite subjects to write about, and I am sort of envious because I would like to be able to deliver what I want to say as fluid as you do. I bounce between adoring you and hating you in a very, very childish way.
Thank you so much for writing this!

I love how you added in quotes from AKO here :D

I love how Andromeda is very in touch with her Black upbringing and how it could affect the people around her. I've never really thought much about Andromeda after Hogwarts, but this fic is really interesting and I might have to see if you have anything else like it!

Very good, I loved the bit about sirius picking up girls ;)

Very nicely in character.

Hilarious XD

It doesn't matter what the forbidden word is; every culture has one. You solved this one beautifully and maturely.

And you gave us a fun little insight into the Tonks' family, and dealing with Sirius Black when he was still footloose and fancy free.

Thank you for this lovely slice of life.

Sincerely,
Miriam

Perfect. I love Andromeda's reaction. Very good job keeping the Sirius and Tonks in-character.