It would be ADHD, not ADD. ADHD means that the person has hyperactive tendencies, ADD is the same but without the hyperactive part. Which isn't really Luffy lol. -

(I realise this is like my seventh review in a row and I look like an idiot but screw that cause this amazing) also I'm crying. It's been what? Twelve Chapters? He's back. I'm crying.

Yep. That fine. Just, crush my heart into a billion pieces- no no-one no need to step on it it's already been shattered beyond repair.

I swear if you kill Luffy I'm going to be SO MAD

Oh my gosh. Where's Chopper when you need him, am I right?

LOL it still rhymes XD

*frying Pans ensue*

I read "meat balls" instead of "metal balls" and let me tell you I was VERY confused to why they decided to throw meat balls at Luffy when they know good and we'll be could eat an entire archipelago of needed.

Wait this took you six years!? Wow. Well it's a really great story so I see why. But the fact that you stood with it to the very end is very impressive. I can't wait to read more!

this is like the 3rd time i have read this story haha iv also read blue gold and pale both of them really good stories. would you consider doing a story where one of his enemies wants revenge and luffy gets captured, tortured and the break his mind stuff happens and they try to bring his mind back but he doesnt know who he is or who anyone is lol unless yu know of a story like that.

Theres so much description and barely any convo, im just reading this for a tortured luffy, not the back stories of OCs i cant picture cuz anime wreckd my visualization skills

Hey I've just got a grammar thingy. I've noticed that a few times now, when talking about time, you use "waist" (the area around your midsection) instead of "waste" (to squander, to use without purpose). Just thought I'd point that out to you so that you know :)

Very good

Oo, is it the island?

so cruel my hearstrings moved for luffy :/ iv never felt like this before :/