Reviews for Knights of the Old Republic II:Sith Lords Telos
RngrThorne chapter 6 . 9/1/2008
Okay, this ride is about to hit the rough spots again. Cool.
Bobboky chapter 6 . 12/12/2006
sweet
WhiteWolf 3 chapter 6 . 11/29/2006
I like how you've potraited the Scoobies (Faith included)
Dr. Masaki chapter 5 . 9/26/2006
Great chapter, I can definetly see some improvement in your writeing style already.

Dunno what to think about the scooby gang showing up with more extras though. It kind of feels like your trying to flood the story with too many main characters once you add the people just from the game itself. But thats a minor point, I guess it will just depend on how you write it.

Xander going to Korriban reminds me of the infinite exp loophole down in that Sith Tomb were you keep clicking on that jedi body and those lizards keep spawning. I have caused my xbox to freeze up half a dozen times in that room.

Im curious though, is everyone going to get a special lightsaber crystal or just the exile?
Wanderersoul chapter 5 . 9/25/2006
Loving the story so far. Great characterization, especially in the context of the setting. Also enjoying the levels of romantic tension. I already see a couple possible pairings. Dawn and Atton though wasn't the first to come to mind, but I like how it's progressing. All I gotta say is that I'd hate to be Atton once Buffy/Giles/Faith and the other protective Scoobies find out about his past and the things he's done(yes, I've played the game multiple times, and yes, I will refrain from saying what the secret is.) Looking forward to seeing a certain redheaded bounty hunter and how she'll fit into the mix(if you go that route). Like I said, great story. Keep it up.
guardian chapter 4 . 9/22/2006
Pretty good remake of the KOTOR 2 using BTVS in the mix.
midvalley9 chapter 4 . 9/21/2006
Great! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Wispr chapter 4 . 9/20/2006
Really nice chapter... good work!

Wispr
Selmephren chapter 3 . 9/15/2006
Just found this, good work!
WhiteWolf 3 chapter 3 . 9/14/2006
I like the Twix bar comment. It would have been better if it had been a Twinkie. Maybe Buffy is in a sharing mood and with who is she going to share or are Xander and Dawn ganging up on her and take away her Twix bar.
Wispr chapter 3 . 9/14/2006
Just finished reading both stories and have to say... bloody great writing! How you blended both KOTOR II and Buffy was very well done. Can't wait for more.

Wispr
mbabyface78 chapter 3 . 9/14/2006
Good story, but what happened to the other four guys?
WhiteWolf 3 chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
I like it.
Rakeesh chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
Not bad, but you might want to review your use of punctuation a bit more, particularly commas. You've got a lot of run-on sentences.