just finished your fanfiction and it truly is entertaining. I know you said it's complete but you left it unfinished. Try finishing it, ok?

I like this story a lot, please update.

When are you going to update? This is an awesome story!

POKE!

just kidding ;] lol

this is a very addicting story, please update soon! ive never read anything like it! and it i had its never been this organized and thought out O.o lol :]

Well, now I'm out of chapters, too bad, I'll have to wait. thanks for keeping the story going, Ja nee1

It's kinda funny, I have to go run some errands yet I can seem to let go of your story for the time being. The anticipation is killing me. Oh well, I have to, arigato, matta nee,

your story seems pretty exciting and intriguing, i like it so far, hope it will keep its hold on me. Arigato, ja...

oh wow, that is really good. I have to know what happens next. Please update soon.

Fun! Magical Girl PoT is a first for me, and poor Echizen gets transformed into a girl, somehow I don't think s/he's going to escape Fuji. Look forward to updates to see how you continue/end it.

Ohmygod, this story is so amazing, I finally got around to reading it, update update update pretty please~, I laughed at the part with Ryoma's dad, such an entertaining story, I read it in one sitting because it's so amazing.

XD Actually, there are stairs you can take up! From the roof floor (just above the 4th floor), well, you can buy a ticket on the roof (it saved us a 2-hour wait), then take the stairs to the main observatory. You can't take them to the special observatory though.

It was fun seeing them at Tokyo Tower, since I can picture it in my head :D

-poke- Hey~! I'm actually reading this and I really want you to update! :D

So, I generally don't read adventure/fantasy fanfictions, but this was near the top of the updated list. I read the whole thing through in about an hour and a half. Translation: I liked it, no, I LOVED IT! I'm like your new fangirl! I really hope you update soon because I really want to know what happens, and who ends up with whom!

In terms of pairings, how about TezukaxRyomaxFuji? Though that is a threesome...it saves you the trouble of having to choose between two very promising pairs because the three pretty much belong with each other IMHO. If you can work it in somehow, that would be awesome. If not, then...oh well, the story is still spewing out awesomeness from every chapter. :D

So, a few chapters back, while reading one of the A/Ns, I read something about a sequel? I don't remember the specific details, but I would definitely be interested in that!

I personally think that, throughout the story, you've done a wonderful job of keeping the characters in character. The only questionable part I saw was when Inui explained the whole Guardian/Tenshi thing. In most fantasy stories, no one really accepts explanations like that so easily. Maybe it was because they had all been seeing strange things, but I think there would at least be one or two people who would object due to the strangeness of the idea. Seigaku is strange, but they're most definitely not stupid. Care to explain that to me, please?

I also really liked the plant monster (you didn't name it, so that's what my oh-so-creative brain is going to call it :p), 'cause plant monsters in general are awesome. Its idea about regenration seems reminiscent of the Greek (or was it Roman? I don't know, they're pretty much the same, except not) Hydra (I think? That one dragon thing that keeps getting new heads everytime one is cut off), and I really liked that. :)

I don't think there was anything wrong with Echizen Nanjirou's characterization either. I would imagine him knowing some random bit of information in the background, so that was perfect! And he'd definitely embarrass Ryoma like that (3 Nanjirou)!

Tezuka and Fuji are almost perfect as well. In most other fanfictions, Tezuka talks too much and Fuji's evilness is carried to far. Tezuka here gives the right commanding feeling of Seigaku's buchou and Fuji has the mischievous air without being dangerous and scary.

Also, though your story doesn't need it too much, do you have beta? If not, I'd like to go through and make some suggestions, if that's okay with you? Let me know please!

Anyway, please update soon! I realize that this was a super long review, but hopefully it'll be helpful! Like I have already stated, I have kind of become an unofficial fangirl of this story. So I will stalk it. And probably annoy you for not updating within the next few weeks or so. If you get too annoyed, just let me know. :)

UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! :D

~ISeeYouStalk

Poor Ryoma, Nanjiroh loves embarressing him

*poke!* cool chapter! it made me have sudden urge to go back and read one of the previous chapters! keep em coming!

lq

hey, someone is actually reading this and wants you to update ;)

Yeah so I adore this story 3

I followed it since '06 actually and I think I even stalked your LJ or something to find more chapters ahead of FF.N. Anyways, hope you update soon