Reviews for Rules of the Game |
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anonwriter64 chapter 38 . 7/21 Aw man I’m re-reading and that cliffhanger is killer |
Gggggggxfhv chapter 12 . 6/21 Oh my god this fic is gonna make me cry, its so wholesome and sad and i love ittttttt |
Slytherin'sAngelOfMusic chapter 8 . 5/9 this was a punch to the gut |
marvinkitfox1 chapter 3 . 3/25 NO. just... fuck no. WHY IN GODS NAME is Harry now lying about running away from the Dursleys "because he got bored"? ? ? !?/ |
marvinkitfox1 chapter 2 . 3/25 Excuse me, but is this Severus Snape a RETARD? He repeatedly ignores strong evidence directly in his face, he even notices discrepancies and then...thinks around them to reach an illogical conclusion? Is someone feeding him LSD, or is he under a persistent Confundus charm, or what? Because he is WAY, WAY, WAAAAAAY out of character here. I do hope this points to some in-plot sneakyness, and not the sheer rampant galopping incompetence by the Author that it appears to be. |
Bhblush chapter 38 . 3/21 Nooooooooooooooo it cant end here |
emilyadyeri chapter 38 . 12/24/2019 Nooooo, it was getting really good! |
csheila chapter 1 . 9/28/2019 Interesting. I like a smart Harry. Tired of the abuse he takes so I hope he continues to fight. |
jmw03u chapter 38 . 9/8/2019 This has been a very good story. I like that Harry has someone to turn to. You did a good job of letting Snape be that person, while still keeping him in character. Thank you for writing this. |
esa.aelfvine chapter 36 . 8/27/2019 Please don’t quit writing! I’m so sorry for your losses. I can’t speak to how awful that must be, but you have my deepest sympathies. Please know that this story is amazing and for me, a person confined primarily to home atm due to chronic illnesses, it has been such a blessing. You are an extremely talented writer and I love every minute of it. Thank you! |
tec4cleveland chapter 38 . 7/7/2019 This has been such a pleasure to read. We're almost 10 years down the road from this last chapter, and I guess life has moved on for you. I hope you are well, wherever you are, and I am sorry I won't get to read the rest of this wonderful story. Take good care. |
Awritingbookworm chapter 38 . 5/30/2019 This is amazing! |
Henri Jane chapter 37 . 4/13/2019 Hello Llama, I hope this finds you well! I tried to send you an email, but it said your email didn’t exist. I was wondering if you still plan on going back to this story. If not, that’s okay. It was really good, and I just wanted to let you know that I think you have quite a talent for writing! Again, hope you’re doing well! ~Henri Jane |
nessiesmith2012 chapter 3 . 3/25/2019 Really? Gryffindor even though. He just stated rules that he has always lived by. He would not be in Gryffindor without being pressures like in the books. Plus at no time when harry was on the streets his magic didnt act to save him or make life easier? If your gonna build up your character dont fall back to the canon at main points since it just doesnt make sense and is quite irritating. Thankfully by ch 3 you've shown your writing formula so readers can stop here or hope it gets better and try coupe more chapters. |
LeaningTowerOfDepression chapter 32 . 2/24/2019 ? |