Reviews for Transitions
Fi Suki Saki chapter 7 . 1/5/2019
I'm so sad Because this fic is SO COOL! but it won't continue...
but I'm glad it was still here for me to read such Amazing fic! the Plot is So Cool!
i'm glad The AU world is not so far away from Supernatural knowledge. so there's change Watanuki can come back even of someone his World Canon Yuuko and Doumeki can't help.

i'm glad even Haruka-san can tell even when he's blind.
Horizon-Dawn chapter 7 . 11/16/2017
Is this going to be continued?
ilko chapter 7 . 6/29/2017
I guess this story must have been abandoned, but I'm hoping one day you might come back to it :) The ways in which each Doumeki and Watanuki do and don't fit together in each combination are breaking my heart. Honestly, the other Doumeki is concerning me in a lot of ways. I'm not sure exactly what's going on with him, except maybe that it's the inverse of what happened to Watanuki as a result of being targeted for so long-growing sharp and hostile, only showing kindness to those he trusts. I understand that he's off-put and worried about Kimihiro, but Watanuki is even more disoriented and in an objectively worse position than he is right now. Would it kill him to be nicer to the guy, especially after he attacked him? :/ I'm also worried about the other Kimihiro. His quietness seems less like maturity than cowed docility, and there's just something so obviously young and scared about him that I'm wondering if maybe he and the other Doumeki aren't as good for each other as they might think? Canon Doumeki is a perfect sweetheart and I hope he gets his happy ending! I also love the hints of other-Himawari having the inverse of her canon condition.
bartlettpear chapter 7 . 6/3/2017
Granted it has been 9 years, but I just discovered this so I hope you are still alive and hopefully well and find well the inspiration to pick this up again one day. I am entirely enjoying the world building of the dimension that Watanuki is in, even if you don't write another chapter of this, it would be awesome if you could share notes you had of the story, where it was going, what would happen, more tidbits of the other world if any and how things would be resolved, and whatnot. Thank you for writing :D
bartlettpear chapter 6 . 6/3/2017
The plot thickens :D
bartlettpear chapter 5 . 6/3/2017
Ah the protection that Haruka made is for Shizuka is awesome. And Watanuki gets to meet Haruka, how fun, hopefully. I like your pacing and transitions :-)
bartlettpear chapter 4 . 6/3/2017
Nice going Doumeki and for Kimihiro also getting an explanation to at least get what is going on more or less.
bartlettpear chapter 3 . 6/3/2017
The differences in the new dimension are very creative. I want a meat korokke now too though orz
bartlettpear chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
Oh no, poor Kimihiro too. I feel the worst for the two that are actually a couple in their own world.
bartlettpear chapter 1 . 6/3/2017
Aw, my heart hurts for the Doumeki's because they are missing their own Watanuki/Kimihiro. Poor Watanuki too because confusion to say the least.
Nana chapter 7 . 5/15/2015
omg please! are you going to continue the story? it's just so great! ;-;
SanctuaryInMusic chapter 7 . 1/15/2015
Oh, no . . . I just finished this chapter and I looked at the last time you updated. I wanted to cry when I saw how long ago it was. But this story is wonderful, and I really want to know what happens next.
Manga60123 chapter 7 . 1/8/2015
I did this to myself. It has been nearly 7-8 years since this story has been written, and I let myself get invested.

Great job, me.

This was a great read.
Astral Writer chapter 7 . 7/13/2014
Ohmygod, this is a good fic! I don't know why you stopped working on it, but please pick it up again! There are too many cliffhangers and I don't think I could imagine where you were going with this.
sgt.karenbear chapter 7 . 1/5/2014
Ohhhh how exciting! I would love to read your next chapter when it comes out! Hopefully soon because it is 2014!
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