Great build-up. The only thing that could have made this better was Ed showing signs of the love he was trying to hide and Al misinterpreting them.

gosh that was just too amazing. al's emotions were explained so well that my heart was thumping trhoughout this fanfic, and I almost cried!

Aw...that was so cute! I loved it!

Brilliant. Thanks for the good read!

I really like this story, it made me smile.

This was so beautiful. You're the best Elricest writer ever. You're plot, imagery, conveying of emotions, and your bringing out characteristics and characters are perfect. I love your work. Adding this to my faves and YOU to my fave author list.

Cutesy angst! That's the best kind ever! X3 Anyway, really nicely written. Please keep up the great work!

Aww this was so cute. I love Al, he's so shy and un-sure. Its cute before Ed is so wild and loud and, the complete oppisite of Al. Great job with this, it was really touching and so believable. Congrats!

I LOVE THIS!

Ooh, very nice... hehe, I love it! Please write more fics. You're really good at these!

And here it is. ALPHONSE HE REALLY DOESN'T MIND YOU EMO ANGSTY BOY! XDD Very cute, Marie. Ed was really sarcastic, so very neato. -

-squeal- Oh! The Cuteness!

your first reviewer, EdxRoy4ever, is a jackass. I hope he didnt offend you! he doesnt know what hes talking about. this place lets YOU write what YOU want. it just pisses me off to see someone that stupid. EdxRoy4ever, if you dont like her story or Elricest great for you. keep it to yourself. nobody wants to know. so think about it before posting stupid reviews,

if you have ever written a story im sure you can imagine how upset you would be if someone said this to you. Dude, im sorry if he made you feel bad, you dont deserve it. This story rocks! your writing is great. And guess what EdxRoy4ever, Ed/Al is forever, so suck on that!)Since hes never going to see this i think ill tell him. lol im so mean, but hey he deserves it.

Im adding you to my author alerts your pretty cool.

-Queen Vampiress

omg, that was just SO cute! even though I dislike Elricest (but I did write a Elricest One-Shot once and I swore on my life never again) this was an awesome story! Great job!

Dude, what is WRONG with you? Gosh you're like the creepy guy at the park that lures small children away with the promise of candy and funnt stories.