That is NO place to stop! This story is going brilliantly, please finish it!

Well! They've finally got some of that tension taken care of, but they still need a conversation covering all of her worries. ;)
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What the fuck!

Hey,

I don't want to bug you because it's been a while and who knows if you're even on fanfic anymore, but I'm the type of person who wonders what happens when stories go unfinished. If you're ever interested in finishing, I am interested in finding out what happens next. Thanks either way!

That's quite a cliffy to leave us all on. I hope you'll update soon, so we can continue on with the steamy bits.

please please please more i want more your story is really really good

So, just found this. Procrastinated a whole day reading it, for which I am both harried yet absurdly grateful. :P And upon reaching this point, have realized that it's been like five years since this was updated.

Sad face. :P

But, I shall valiantly push on because I feel like you had a million ideas for this story, and I am definitely signing on to see those ideas manifest themselves at some point in time, though it be a seven or even eighteen year wait for those, too. :D If Jareth can do it, so can we, your readers.

So thank you for these chapters of awesome, and this story of awesome, and hopefully someday I'll have more to review because you have more that you'll have written. :D xo

YOU NEED TO UPDATE. NOW, PLEASE.

Metrosexual?

Hey, this is really wonderful. I love how you circumvented the age old Labyrinth fic problem of his creepiness and of control so well. They have equal power now, and it makes for a really interesting dynamic. I'd love to find what resolves the situation. I have some ideas, but this is your story. Please feel free to continue! Thanks for this gem.

...Why would you stop here?
JUST WHY?

This is such a great story and chp 19 is a nice stopping point even though it does not "feel" finished.
I had a lot of fun reading it and will probably read it again.
Thank you for sharing it.

I am still in hopes that you will finish this story. I'm wondering how it will all turn out, if Jareth will get his kingdom back, and/or if Sarah will go back home. It's really interesting, and I'm enjoying the read so far.

Poor little girl. All you want to do is enjoy life and you get stuck in etiquette classes and politics.

Just how long has Jareth been anticipating her reaction?