I love this fic! Perfect in every way!

This has got to be the best KH fanfic I have ever read! I was completely enthralled and kept guessing from start to finish. It was a total mind f**k. Its the best story of its style I have come across. It is reminiscent to the clever movie wild things. Over all fantastic!

awesome story!

This was a beautiful story, a masterpiece if you will. I loved it and how each and every part of the plot got tied together somehow to beatrix and sephy. loved it!

I was curious and checked out your profile after I read your review (for probably like the third time...I do so love reviews -heart-)

This is an adorable piece of work, right here. I'm thinking about checking out the others you have going :D

And with that, unfortunately, my wit seems to have failed me. So I think I'm going to leave it here.

Toodle-oo! :)

Ivy J.

Back again, and as always, this chapter was..shocking! I love Cid's role in all of this, him searching tirelessly for sora oblivious to the fact that the Bar he was in was crawling with connections. Irony poisoning X_X Greatly written and all that as well, but one issue ive seen a few times-You sometimes use the incorrect from of 'too',instead you use 'to' when its the other-but so far Ive only seen it in CH16, so maybe it was just an offday.

Sorry if im reviewing less frequently-my procrastination habits have come back to bite me in the ass, so time is limited:'( II shall read more...tomorro, right now Im tired as hell-btw, will this have a lemon, or will it stick to the lime? Either way, its delicious...mm delirium

Hmm, where to start. Well i checked my E-mail today, and I was glad I did! I didnt know you'd actually replied;, but now that I know someone's there, I feel a bit more motivated XD Im glad I was able to lift your spirits! but seriously it was the least I could do, I live on a moutain with limited internet access-this was practically a godsendXD Yea ive been sorta dissapointed in the soriku fanfics, and after hours of fustration ive compiled that...adults write the best ones-whoda guessed XD But like I said,I love this, and even though I had to search like every character from FF9 down, I was glad for the variation of characters here, and while everyone loves the yaoi, I ususally look for *someting* with a plot thats not half baked-or too full of holes-and so I was definately relieved to have found this! Haha, dont worry about your first few chapters, they did seem sorta melodramatic, but its those intense cliffies that hooked me into this! just letting you know, and I was also very happy to hear that my advice helped you! Usually the point of a review is to offer key advise, but i seem to do very little of that; Oh, and this fic deserves more attention, I caught this by chance when skimming for something good to read-so id suggest getting it in to a community(dont fret though, .project's soriku story, which was awesome IMO, has also suffered from neglect:,() So yea-you're welcome! Im loving it more every chapter,but I really love how sora is, *not* the stereotypical weak, girl boy most make him out to be. He's got connections too XD Well, haha, i blew my HW for this again, not that i regrett-you adults and your freetime, btw goodluck with the tight schedule;)

Oh, if only Vincent waited a bit longer there, couldve worked with cid or something. and doesnt Rikku's plan seem a bit reckless, I mean, Riku and sora hardly know these people. Well i suppose its better than being caught by beatrix, but he probably should have weighed his options a bit more. And sephiroth-that was an awesomely sneaky little suprise. He is by nature a deceptive character, so that was awesome. Yea-this seems like it should so be an anime...well i can dreamXD

hm, so you update pretty quickly from what Ive read-fear not, take your time, Im sbsolutely enticed with this story here, and if its already done then, YES! If not then Id be glad to be part of the preocess. So getting back to sora-por sora! XD cant believe it, though im itching to find out what it is bitch-i mean beatrix gave him...im assuming that its the same drug she gave Aerith, and Im also curious of Vincents history with her. And im unsure about Riku's father, but he doesnt exctly come off as a bad person-a foolish one, but not malicious like friggin beatrix.

O dam! That was definately a crazy ass twist thereO_O Jeez, I just cant stand that bitch Beatrix anymore, I was tolerable untill this point, she broke my final Sora loving straw:( Haha, but seriously, Sephiroth? Now I cant wait to see how things will start to unfold, this one convoluted drama. Yes you just have a knack for suspense XD Oh and one meager piece of advice-when you're quoting someone while in a doalogue, you put the quotes in apostrophes, "like 'this'" just letting you know-and you should also leave the quotes out and leave the words italicized when writing people's thoughts-makes it a bit less confusing. Hope that helped you in the slightest, continuing to next chapter

Omg sora has amnesia! Its the like the perfect KH soap opera XD. Well im immpressed that you managed to pull off the whole amnesia gimmick without sounding corny, and i hafat admit that that was an all time low for beatrix there. Unbelievable, and its especially sad for riku. His whole world has forgotten him;_; Anyways, youre so lucky to have played so many of the Final Fantasy gamesO_O you cant friggin buy them anywhere these days..*grumble* yet another job well done-and hey, if you still go on i would totally suggest checking out .project107's stories, she's such a sweetie

O shiz, Thats a serious cliffhanger my friend. Id be lying if I sadi you were'nt a master of suspense! and ironic circumstances aside, I really enjoyed this chapter. Not just the romance or fluff, but this is really one of the better written fanfics(which sadly dont get the recognition they deserve) and you also seem pretty smart. You knew that neon signs operated on gas, not electricity, and several other lil things that make you awesome like that. Guess im still in a good moodXD but yea, love this-hope its complete and if not-keep going cuz its awesome! ;)

Aww!My deepest condolences for your car. Cant believe some assholes. But it made the stry lots more intersting if that helps;; Seriously though, I really love this-the fact that itslate, i failed to do HW and Ive reviewd like every chapter speaks for itselfXD Maybe im just in a good mood, but yea, this is great. And now im begining to see Tidus' motives, but it still seems like sora should give him a stern yet sincere talking to-and im wondering what happened to siefer all of a sudden. Oh, and i was totlly guessing this since maybe a couple chapters ago, but I bet sora, riku and Yunalesca are gona totally run into Beatrix and Barali(or something like that, sorry real late at night _ ) /That/ would be an ironic Circumstance for the records. but yea i love this-the dramatic plotline and sora are pockey for the soul

Aww, i felt pretty bad for Tidus. I didnt really see him as a bad guy, just unlucky reguarding Riku, but I understand Sora defending there was no angst about riku being with other guys, and the seed of worry being sewn into chapters of hair tearing emoism, for sora. But i do love the conflicts, and especially a good plot-and shit, Sora's mom is such a lying ho, excuse my language. She should've at least waited untill her second trimester before abandoning sora, but then again he'll get to spend that much more time with riku-asuming he doesnt go off vacationing with his Mom soon-so Im good;)

Yay time skipy! Glad sora and Riku are good buds now-they didnt suddenly 'fall in love with eachother at first sight'*gags* its much more believable. Conviniently enough this chapter..or was it the last?..well answered pretty much all my questions about sora and kairi, and im most fully satisfied. Im also pleased that, even though his mom is a deranged ho(alil harsh?) sopra stil cares about her somewhat. But of course that fact that hes /not/ a snoot rich kid is awesomeness. Also i love how you intermix the disney characters so well into this. Figaro was too cute. And im waiting to see how alice plays into any of this, if she is at all. Yet another great cliff hanger there, i believe its what Beatrix deserves, but i cant help feeling sorry for sora for having to be in the crossfire of things. And even moreso for the baby;_;