Hmmm, the story ended with the beginning of the war, interesting, very interesting.

How disappointing, it is the same shit as the Canon, no, it is worse, Naruto is pathetic, his mother dies because of that people and he lets himself be dominated by Ino.

please let Naruto and Ino end up together, those two belong together. plus I love that u made Naruto and Sakura siblings, I have always considered them more like brother and sister then a romantic couple.

love this story so far. can't wait to see where you go from here. (Naruto and Ino 4 ever).

I know you wrote slightly different, but aren't Naruto supposed to be older than Sakura?

You ruined team 7. What you made might be an offshoot of Naruto, but by changing an event which would serve as the very foundation of the series, you pretty much destroyed it.

good story, although this end is very loose, a prologue would be great where you see wedding and part of the future, but in the end is your story, greetings, congratulations, chao

Killing off Sasuke Uchiha will have some major repercussions no matter how hard naruto trains and no matter how hard he tries. Theirs is no way in hell he’d be able to beat Obito legitimately, though to be fair the only reason sasuke and naruto beat obito in the first place was because of talk no Jutsu. However that is out of the question due to naruto having been the one to kill sasuke. I am so very confused now...like how will they pull that off. I must know.

Chapter six and despite the slight backstory changes to the story I fucking love this slowburn.

sakura: yeah yeah inopig, i will plan your wedding in the future naruino

Honestly might be the best story I've ever read on here and maybe one day you'll make a sequel for this where my favorite Pairing of Ino and Naruto are married and Naruto is Hokage and they raise Chiyo together. Anyways amazing stuff and I'm really glad I found this.

nice

no thanks i dont want to see the kids karen... so but out.

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Great story.