Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on the story when it was getting good.

Laura/X23 is one of the few that slaughtered people at an extremely young ade

The yondaime's name is Minato

I love how NOBODY is questioning the fact that an EIGHT year old is slaughtering squadrons of fighters with ease. I hope some readers have noticed how stupid that sounds.

I'm sorry but I can't continue reading this nonsense.

A six year old could not possibly be that strong. You should have made Naruto older so the story would make sense.

Nope. I won't believe it.
I absolutely adore that adorable little hyuuga bunny but Hinata is nowhere near as pure as Haku.
Hinata is like water. She flows. At one moment gentle, the next a crashing tidal wave. She can lay still with unstoppable current far below the surface. Beautiful and free. It can bring bounty to those who respect it, or death to those who are ignorant of its strength.
Haku is snow. Some call it cold, unfeeling, death. But it can also be pure, beautiful, and miraculous. No two snowflakes are ever the same for each is its own masterpiece of nature. And although the winter brings an end to all things. It also heralds the new beginning.

Hinata is a Princess, Haku is an Angel.
No character in Naruto ever had or will ever have Hakus purity, her light. And no character has ever had such an impact on Naruto himself. Many forget that Naruto forged his nindo thanks to Haku. The same nindo that would see peace brought to the world. He was a boy who desired acceptance and admiration. Yet after Haku he became a man who could show others the way to happiness.

Bemusement means to cause someone confusion. I think you meant amusement when Naruto was talking to Zack.

Please do continue this story it is a great one and very interesting

This is a godlike fanfic I could get behind. At least he worked for his power unlike some others that by some accident turn him into a chibi Rikudo sennin at age 5. But I can understand how it works in this story at least. Hoko the crazy tuck that he is likes to experiment on little boys as much as pedo-teme. No wonder Naruto's emotionless lol. But are you gonna use Anima from FF-X? That would certainly be badass and promote the phrase 'do not fuck with me'.

FYI Yondaimes Name is Minato Namikaze
looked it up on naruto wiki?

WHY DOES EVERYONE GIVE NARUTO CURVED BLADES ARE JAP BLADES? WHY NOT A FAKING BROADSWORD OR SOMETHING THAT CAN ACTUALLY STAB AND CUT?

Why would some random jackass just steal Naruto for no apparent reason? PLOT HOLES ANYONE? Don't pull the hole "WE ARE GONNA TRAIN NARUTO TO BE A BAD ASS." cliche.

Well for one the hole "Zeon" guy acting like he is stronger then a hokage pisses me the hell off, Minato would have just lopped him head of right at that moment.

Update?

Not a chance in hell, being almost ten years now.

This fic is good -needs some touch up to the spelling though.

DECLARED ABANDONED -someone take this up please.

A bit confused at his ooc-ness at the end there. At this point in time he's shown no remorse over killing in any way whatsoever, then all of a sudden he does once he sees a canon character? Not only that, but he totally disregards the prisoner he busted his ass to capture? Just seems random.