Reviews for Laws of Motion |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn straight, Daisuke will always bee uke X D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want to say, that out of ALL of the D. fanfics for this couple, that I have read...This was far by: the BEST! :D It wasn't rushed. It wasn't too OOC like most and the dialogue was really easy to read. It was a smart idea to make Dark's dialogue in bold and Niwa's thinking in italics. :) Plus, I really liked the idea of Newton's Three Laws of Motion. When I was reading this, I would randomly speak out loud. "I see what you did there!" ;D Also, of all the D. fanfics I've read, so far, this was the first one to receive a review from me. :) I am really happy I was able to find a SatoDai fanfic worthy of my review! :) I want to thank you for writing this! It was really awesome! Keep writing awesome, SwampyGreenie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. Dai is just so innocent and submissive. That's why he's the uke XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah... that last line was precious. Awesome fic! Sexy and funny. You gotta love Dark's comments xD -faved- |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I told you so..." An amazing way to end a fic :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Clever and hot! The ending was hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! Love Seme-Sato! And, really, Dai as Seme? That would just be too weird... Lovely sex scene. Sato and Dai flirting was just too funny for words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHAHAHAHA I TOLD YOU SO XD LAUGHED TILL I CRIED! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. the ending was hilarious 'i told you so' haha i tried to contain the laughter but failed.. keep on going ur awesome _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow... that was so awesome... |
![]() ![]() aw |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great oneshot! I love how Daisuke's a perv. Somehow it suits him. Satoshi finding out about it was good. And his explanations of equal and opposite reactions was fantastic! I love it how Satoshi asked Daisuke what he wanted. And his reaction was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right Riku, they were Fighting. coughcoughNOTcoughcough Great Lemon! Love those two together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well. That helped with my Physics class... . I don't think I'll have trouble remembering those three laws now... - Smile! _ ~Ireina |