Why is Jack the most raped character ever? The story isn't terrible, the author was obviously very young when it was written, but a rape warning would have been nice.

I Love It!

I would not lable this "complete" - there is nothing more frustrating than a tease.

Great story, I think it really shows a lot of emotion. I loved reading it, it had a very 'real life' feel to it.

I thought the multiple rape and Riddick in therapy were a little much, but overall quite liked your story. Thanks for sharing it!

I love this story! It's kinda how I imagined there relationship to be like which is awesome! 3 much love -Eve

OMG I LOVE this story! More please ... NOW!

I love this story, I mean I usually don't like Jack/Riddick, but this is a really good one! Nice Job!

This was an excellent story! Very well written! Can't wait to start the sequel!

Totally loved this story... Good thing you mentioned that it has a sequel. Keep on writing.

Damn that story is awesome

definetly one of my faves! :D

When I saw 'thank you' as the subject for chapter 16 I about screamed. I just couldn't believe you would leave it like you did, but then I saw you you were working on a sequel and all was right with the world again. I just love how Riddick was copying everything she was doing until he found something that would give him back some measure of control. That's such a Riddick thing to do. Great job and now anxiously awaiting the sequel.

ooh! can't wait for more. as long as you keep it jr, i will read.

so that is the end of the story? Blut you are making a sequel, I guess that is ok...lol Can't wait to read it.