Reviews for Loneliness
derekctomlinson chapter 1 . 6/27
rei smirking at her boyfriend shinji fuck my pussy with your penis now
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9
Wow what a stand up guy eh
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
Well that escalated quickly
Archdruid-Sephiroth chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Bravo

I enjoy the occasional lemon. This one was very tastefully done, didn't get over descriptive about the naughty bits and had a sweet story behind it. It's one that has been done before so no points for originality but honestly, I don't think I can get enough of this particular plot. I haven't written one like this myself but I'm starting to think I need to do a few one shots to get myself back on the horse so to speak.

Bah, I'm rambling. Thanks for the read.
Tech-Man chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
One of best.
Strudol chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
holy crap! you're not a native speaker? your engilish is excelent! and this is one of the best lemons i've ever read! excelent job!
Alpha Taco chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Firstly, I want you to write your other ideas.

Secondly... My face is winning the national blush contest.
Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Man this was sweet, I loved it, want more soon, keep up ze good work
BlitzKrank chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
hey man, I agree with the others, its a beautifull story, passionate and loving, and Shinji is perfetly in character, but I agree about the other thing as well, ITS TOO SHORT! I'm actually begging here (gets on knees) make it into a story instead of a oneshot! please!
ian chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
good story
KAZEONI chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
This was a great Shinji and Rei love fic I though you did a good job as for spelling and grammer i could find no errors at all you make more fics like this one mabe a Rei and Asuka fic or a Shinji and Asuka fic well bye for now
TensageRules chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
Awsome story man, love it

well thought out!
the grey mage chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
aw...hes such a great person. not taking advantage yet still giving her what she wants.

you could continue this you know.
LegendKamina chapter 1 . 1/25/2007
Dude, this was GOD. You make them so passionate, its so sweet!
Noname chapter 1 . 11/22/2006
Woow. That was good. It's different and so much better than those lemons where it's only about the lemon, and don't bother with a plot. Good job _
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