SEIFER! LAZY ASSHOLE!

(Sniff) Poor Squall...Seifer Almsay is a son of a bitch!

Squall using the name Texas Milton to sneak back into Garden made me giggle so hard. I think it would have been extra funny if he'd worn big fake glasses in addition to the hairstyle/color change and scar coverup. It'd have been like Clark Kent/Superman. :)

OKAY, WTF why Ellone? Why could it not being someone else?

That. was. terrible. I'm up at two! Only something realy terrible could keep me up this late, right? Nope. It was your fanfic of awesomeness. Poor Ellone :( She's one of those people that are marked as weak and hencforth, get abused in fanfic. (Guilty as charged)

I did have one slight issue though. I don't know if it was by accident, but you got abbreviations all mixed up. Example: The SeeD's wandered around. It would be the SeeDs. If there's and apostrophe it would be like this: The SeeD's bank account was low. It shows that one thing is plural, the other implies possession.

We're: We are.

You're: You are.

PC's is another one, in most instances, if not all, it should have been PCs. PC's is used as: The PC's screen shut off. Not; 'start-up theme for PC's.'

SORRY! I can't help it. I am a grammar freak and just trying to help out. Sorry if I'm just being annoying at this point. But really, this story was GREAT! (Visits author page to read other amazing fics)

Seifer is such an arse here. I seriously wonder how Squall was blamed for this. Corrupt court definitely.

Poor Ellone she's such a tortured soul but then again her sentence was not too bad after all considering what she did.

Squall as a blond is pretty funny man. Weird how he could get pass people with a change in hair colour and by covering his scar. Well at least he couldn't completely fool Rinoa. She's just so awesome.

The lawyer is such a bastard and the judge is stupid. Closing the case in the face of an excellent and valid point? Idiotic corrupt court. Thankfully Ellone showed up due to extreme guilt.

Thanks for writing an awesome tale once again. Was really glad to read a story of yours to the end. Hope that you'll return to finish the other fics one day.

Cheers

Keep Writing

great story. i really enjoyed reading it ]

I think I remember reading this a long time ago but I don't remember it at all. You did a good job with this the second time around )

That was definitely awesome. I was not expecting what happened at the end! It was so good! Thanks for writing it!

Hoshi

I really like this story so far! I couldn't believe Selphie though! Meanie! Not you...Selphie! Lol. Seriously though! This story is really good so far! I like it a lot!

this is a nice story. better version i'd say.

What a wonderful end to another lovely story. (I'm sorry it wasn't sooner, this review, I wanted to leave one but never had the time.) I've really enjoyed this story, through and through, and I'm quite sure it's improved since the last time you wrote it. Chapters and verses literally fell off the pages here, because you're such a wonderful writer. I will move on to your next stories pretty soon as you've inspired me to just keep going with your muse, you know? I'm still looking forward to more from Highway to the DangerZone, I hope you didn't think I forgot about it, lol! . Well then, Congratulations on yet another complete story! It was awesome! _

great story. I really like the changes you made from the first version to this one. I like the ending much better. Great job look forward to reading future stories.

good story

Great fic! It had just the right amount of suspense and a smooth plot. Thank you for not making Rinoa wear blue! (You don't know how much that means to me.)

Keep writing!