I love this story. I previously read your Kuroshitsuji fics (and I adore them) and just recently fell into the fma fandom. Of course, I end up shipping the ships that hardly have any content xD Imagine my delight when I discovered that you, a brilliant writer that I love, also ship Elricest? And that you've written awesome stories such as this one? I'm in heaven! :D

wasn't so bad.

huh. I'm not really an Edcest fan but this

Waw... That's wonderful. I really enjoyed it ! :D

I do love Winry as a character, she is a good help and understands the boys, but i'm glad she got hurt here :P (emotionally) because otherwise,...heehheheheh

ahh, this AU one was perfect. i loved it so~

but now i keep thinking of my own Psych class. haha. XD

Wow, nice.

Sugoi

Aw, that is so sweet. I enjoyed reading this, and I hope that you write something that is just as good as this!

You have an amazing way with paragraphs. You put the emphasis exactly where it should go to make the most impact. Case Study three is a good example... really amazing. I love how you've incorporated the psychology as well.

"Outside, the world was white and empty. They were the only ones alive."

I actually had to stop and quote this for my Writer's Craft course journal. It has such an amazing feeling to it... and it really gives the situation an image...

Ok.

EdxAl is my new official 'I can't believe I read it and liked it' ship.

And I can only blame myself for being a diehard lover of impossible loves! Hm. No. Wait, I can blame YOU too, for writing so terribly WELL.

Thank you for your gift to the fanfiction universe!

First off, you have some of my favorite lines in FMA fanfiction.

1. "My brain likes your brain."

2. The cure wasn't working.

3. Brothers dont' make out on the kitchen counter.

4 "It wouldn't be Heaven if you weren't there."

and finally 5. As always, they didn't have to wait long, as always, Ed couldn't deny Al anything.

Second, I really like your format of using case studies for scene changes. It is really different and inticing and you can't help but to want to find out how the case study key term is used in the scene.

Third, the imagery of Al taking a bite of Ed's apple (which is commonly known as the forbbiean fruit) was a real nice touch of symbolism.

Fourth, it made me really happy that I remembered a lot of the psychology that you put in the story!

Fantasic job!

Love it!

I just wanted to tell you how much I love your work! x3 Its cute and fluffy and aw you just want to read more. x3

Keep writing, would ya? ;]

I love these!